Talk:World (Lindita song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 01:08, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * "the challenges within a modern society and rising up against wars and pleading for peace and love." reword this sentence
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:28, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * "with the Albanian-language song "Botë"." mention that "Botë" is actually "World"'s Albanian-language version
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:26, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * "the song live on numerous occasions, including in Amsterdam, Madrid and Tel Aviv." I think it would be ideal to state in which festivals/shows the song was performed as well
 * I think its better to keep this part as in other Eurovision articles.✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:26, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Background...

 * "Lyrically, its about the challenges within a modern society as well as rising up against wars and pleading for peace and love" Reword this sentence, it sounds awkward, and mention who said the song was about that
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:55, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * "and that its lyrics would be translated into English." According to ref 2., the song was originally written in English but was translated to Albanian for purposes of the Festivalis
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 12:06, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * "World" was musically characterised as an English-language pop-rock "power", "spherical" and "Bond-style" ballad.[7][8][9][10] WP:OVERKILL. It would be better to mention which author said what about the song, expanding the section
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:55, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * "A science fiction-inspired" this is not supported by any source
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:23, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Remove this, per WP:SYNTH: " It was released to generally positive reviews from critics and fans."
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:23, 23 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Can you elaborate on the performances she made in Madrid, Tel Aviv, Amsterdam? I'm talking about the dates, the festivals/events' names, if possible include something about the performance
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:36, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * "Upon its release, "World" received positive and mixed reviews from music critics. " again, WP:SYNTH
 * Should i delete that now?--Lorik17 (talk) 12:09, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes, unless you find a source stating the song received positive and mixed reviews from critics.--Paparazzzi (talk) 22:29, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Done.


 * Unlink pop-rock
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:23, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Verdict

 * Very well-written. I'm going to put this on hold. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 06:52, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I have merged the composition and critical reception sections into one, because the latter was too short. I hope you don't mind. Also, something I forgot to mention, please describe the synopsis of the music video, using the YouTube video as a reference. I trust you could do it. I'm going to pass the nomination since my other comments were already addressed. Congratulations! --Paparazzzi (talk) 22:45, 23 April 2020 (UTC)