Talk:Worlds Apart (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 20:15, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review. I'll begin by doing a close readthrough of the article, noting any initial issues here, and then will turn to the criteria checklist. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:15, 4 January 2013 (UTC)

Initial readthrough
This is very well-written, and remains clear to someone who doesn't watch the show despite the confusion of the plot (parallel universes, etc.).
 * "The idea of shutting down the bridge created by the Machine is brought up" -- by who?
 * "plans are made to shut down the bridge before this time runs out" -- by who?
 * "known for his work on the science fiction television series Supernatural and Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles among others" -- not sure "among others" is needed in this sentence, which is a bit wordy.

Since these points are so minor, I'm heading straight to the checklist. -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:35, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I removed "among others", but will have to rewatch the episode to clarify who says what (I'm planning on buying the S4 DVD one of these days...).  Ruby  2010/  2013  21:06, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
 * My pleasure--thanks for your work on this one, and, from what I see on your user page, many others! -- Khazar2 (talk) 21:29, 4 January 2013 (UTC)