Talk:Worthington Brewery/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:49, 23 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * The Worthington Brewery (Worthington & Co.) was founded by William Worthington in the English Midlands town of Burton upon Trent in 1761. → Try and expand history with information in article ✅


 * It's a small article, I don't want to overwhelm the intro, but I've added some more history to the first paragraph.Farrtj (talk) 19:46, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Overview

 * Put this section below the "History" section ✅

History

 * Fair use rationale needed for portrait of Worthington ✅
 * Fix disambiguation issue with "cooper" according to this ✅

Worthington White Shield

 * William Worthington's White Shield (5.6% ABV) is available bottle conditioned and in casks.[18] → "William Worthington's White Shield" should not be bolded ✅