Talk:Wyatt Earp/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Canpark (talk) 09:39, 12 April 2011 (UTC)

There are dead external links and dablinks which need fixing via the tools to the top right of this review page. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:54, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Non-reviewer comment:


 * Adabow's points haven't been addressed yet. I personally wouldn't have been so quick to pass this article as GA.  I'm glad more citations were added, but other issues remain.  I've fixed the EL-farm and the unnecessary editorializing in the "Further reading" section, but the "popular culture" section is largely unnecessary.  If it should exist at all, it should be hugely culled to include only the most notable pop culture representations, converted into prose format, and reliably sourced throughout.  The lead also needs expansion per WP:LEAD.  I hope that the article continues to improve so that it can proudly display its GA banner. María ( habla  con migo ) 12:58, 13 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I substantially expanded the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. — btphelps (talk) (contribs) 19:41, 14 April 2011 (UTC)