Talk:Xenosaga I & II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 11:34, 9 September 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Can "ether" or "ether points" by wikilinked to something? Or just clarified to the reader? I have the feeling non-gamers will have no idea what ether is.
 * I'd wikilink "voice work" to Voice acting.
 * I'd change "and required rewrites" to "requiring rewrites".
 * You've got one sentence starting with "A major change" and the next starting with "A major issue". I'd slightly reword one of them.
 * "reaching #15" - see MOS:HASH
 * Grammar error - change "while another found" to "another reviewer found"
 * "and it being in Japanese was a barrier" - this seems like awkward working, how about ", also citing the game being in Japanese as a barrier".
 * "and praised the battle" - I'd change this to "also praising the battle".
 * Actually you've got four uses of "praise" in the final paragraph. Mix it up a little.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Well done overall. Putting this one on hold while minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 11:58, 9 September 2017 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed. --ProtoDrake (talk) 12:24, 9 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Happy to pass this. Congrats. Freikorp (talk) 15:26, 9 September 2017 (UTC)