Talk:Xiaxue/GA4


 * Note: User:Hildanknight has sadly withdrawn his nomination. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 10:01, 6 April 2013 (UTC)

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bonkers The Clown (talk · contribs) 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

I'd be happy to review this! More to come. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯

Images

 * Out of date... I suggest you try to find more pictures to enhance this page. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 09:05, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Lead

 * Needs to be expanded a bit to comply with WP:LEAD. Except for a birth date and name, I don't see the slightest mention of her birth in the lede. Possibly could add lines like "Born in Singapore, blah blah blah"... ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 * No need to link "Singaporean" per WP:MOS. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Either stick to a serial comma or don't. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Infobox? ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 08:26, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Other

 * Blogs. Other media, controversy, etc., could be lumped up into one "Career" section with subsequent sub-sections. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Content-wise, there's much more to work on. See also. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 09:05, 3 April 2013 (UTC)