Talk:Xue Susu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 03:42, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

The last analogous article was a nice experience. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:42, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Criteria
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Discussion
The comprehensive review has not yet started; I have reviewed the images however. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:25, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Image PD tags fixed, thanks. Yunshui 雲 &zwj; 水  07:55, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

Lead & Infobox
Fine here.

Biography
"...among the literati and government official who..." Plural form of officials Does Qian Qianyi garner a wikilink?
 * Pluralised "officials", good spot. Qian Qianyi is wikilinked, so I'm not sure what you mean - are you suggesting it shouldn't be? Yunshui 雲 &zwj; 水  21:52, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I've also change "eremite" in the lead back to "recluse" - for most English-speakers, "eremite" is a comparatively archaic reading of hermit, and she wasn't really a hermit in the sense that the word is usually used in English; her retirement from the world doesn't seem to have been a full-on cave-in-the-desert job - she just stopped going out much! Yunshui 雲 &zwj; 水  21:52, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
 * My mistake, and I see. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 22:28, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

Paintings
Fine here.

Poetry
Excellent.

Archery
Intriguing, as well as excellent.

Conclusion
This is a fine article. Once everything above has been mitigated, it will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:10, 13 June 2013 (UTC)