Talk:Yakhini massacre

Additional citations for Articles and rewrite
As per discussion at AfD I have reviewed and summarized the current sources, and added confirmation with English refs. That work is posted below. I will be using this to rewrite the article in NPOV wiki voice over the next hours. Ayenaee (talk) 16:53, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Rewrite complete

 * Rewrite completed and live. Following changes made
 * - Citations updated and added to. There are now 4 out of 7 English citations with summaries of Hebrew citations given on this page.
 * - Text rewritten in NPOV and wiki voice to align with citations
 * - Citations given for deaths and injuries
 * - Infobox updated


 * In terms of AFD, citation needed, and NPOV tags:
 * - I have provided additional refs, clarified Hebrew refs, and aligned text to refs. I have rewritten the article in a neutral way only referencing exactly what is said in the refs. I believe the citation/NPOV tag can now be removed, but will leave that for others.
 * - I don’t believe that the article meets AfD requirements anymore. The article is notable because of the deaths on all sides mentioned in more than one citation. It’s also notable because of the video which was reported by media worldwide. This article is now of the same wiki standard as the other articles (on Gaza, West Bank, and Israel) which provide more detail on specific incidents


 * If there are minor corrections (spelling, grammar, formatting etc) you want to make please make them directly to the article.
 * Any other changes should be brought to this talk page for discussion and consensus. I don’t think WP:BRD will work on these kinds of page because of their sensitive nature and misunderstandings that can occur (IMHO not a wiki rule).

I wish everyone peace and good editing Ayenaee (talk) 22:41, 6 November 2023 (UTC)


 * The New York Post is listed as "generally unreliable" on the Perennial Sources list:
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Perennial_sources#New_York_Post David O. Johnson (talk) 23:01, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks - I’ll see what else I can find (and look at the list 😏) Ayenaee (talk) 23:14, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I’ve replaced NYP with 2 refs:
 * - One reflecting video events in English
 * - One agreeing with ynet that number of deaths was 7 (NYP reflected 4, so article said 4-7, but I’ve replaced this with 7 only now)
 * I’ve also updated ref table above. Thanks for the heads-up. Ayenaee (talk) 15:04, 7 November 2023 (UTC)