Talk:Yakovlev Yak-19/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox; all good
 * Section 1;
 * Mention "OKB" in full, perhaps in italics as it is a Russian name, and explanation in braces
 * Mention about Lyulka TR-1, turbojet etc.
 * had been used previously; "previously" in the sense? Could mention the aircraft in which the design was used
 * he was provided; rephrase to maintain gender neutrality
 * Soviet fighter pilots of this period were all male.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:53, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Section 2;
 * Link Shpitalny Sh-3 autocannon
 * with the Hero of the Soviet Union, Lieutenant Colonel Mikhail Ivanov, at the controls; like this, it feels that "Hero of the Soviet Union" look like a position, rather than a title. Perhaps "with the Lieutenant Colonel Mikhail Ivanov (Hero of the Soviet Union awardee), at the controls" or something similar would do.
 * Probably best just to drop the medal entirely.
 * Lavochkin La-152#Izdeliye 156; just "Izdeliye 156" would be enough
 * I see that Sergei Anokhin was also given the honour of "Hero of the Soviet Union", so better to mention that too.
 * Rolls-Royce Derwent is over-linked
 * 0% confidence, violation unlikely
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:42, 10 February 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:53, 25 February 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:39, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:39, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:39, 1 March 2017 (UTC)