Talk:Yamaha XSR900/to do

Docteur Pie (talk) 22:36, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Lead
 * 2) put UJM ref into Reception (see 3.2.)
 * 3) "Background" → "Model development"
 * 4) put "The Yamaha XSR900 and MT-09 share the same ... and stiffened suspension" over "Yamaha brought the XSR900 to market in 2016, releasing it in two variants world-wide"
 * 5) change "Yamaha brought the XSR900 to market in 2016, releasing it in two variants world-wide" to "The XSR900 was released in two variants:"
 * 6) insert between "... and stiffened suspension" and "The XSR900 was released in two variants": "The XSR900 engine produces no more power than the MT-09's" with MCN quote (engine output details)
 * 7) delete heading "Model Updates" between "... and stiffened suspension" and "Little changed from ..."
 * 8) "... will be sold conventionally through dealers"
 * 9) "Awards" → "Reception"
 * 10) insert "The earlier MT-09 was generally well received by the motorcycle press. Motorcycle News declared ..." with MCN quote
 * 11) insert "In response to such criticism ... " with quotes from MCN and Cycle World (UJM ref; see 1.1.)
 * 12) change "On its release, the 2016 XSR900 received journalistic praise and it gained several awards including Cycle World's; 2016 Best Middleweight Street Bike and G-Mark's; 2016 Good Design Award" to "The XSR900 garnered several awards including Cycle World's 2016 Best Middleweight Street Bike and G-Mark's 2016 Good Design Award"