Talk:Yeah 3x/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 06:26, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * No issues


 * Lead
 * An accompanying music video was directed by Colin Tilley and filmed at the Universal Studios. – Remove "the"
 * ...in a neighborhood of old-timey storefronts... – Use a different phrase beside "old timey"
 * ✅ Oz   talk  22:50, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Background and recording
 * No issues


 * Composition
 * According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group... – Publisher is actually Sony/ATV Music Publishing
 * ✅ Oz   talk  22:50, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * Megan Vick from Billboard Magazine added... – "Magazine" does not need to be capitalized
 * ✅ Oz   talk  22:50, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * No issues


 * Music video
 * The music video for "Yeah 3x" was directed by Colin Tilley and filmed at the Universal Studios. – Remove "the" before "music video"
 * ✅ Oz   talk  22:50, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * No issues


 * Track listing
 * No issues


 * Credits and personnel
 * Instead of using the small dash (-) between the personnel, use the bigger dash (–)
 * ✅ Oz   talk  22:50, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Charts and certifications
 * No issues


 * Radio and release history
 * No issues


 * See also
 * No issues


 * References
 * Use  to organize section better
 * References 3, 6, 45, 50, 54 – Rap-Up does not need to be wiki-linked because it is already wiki-linked in Reference 2
 * References 8, 9, 47 – "MTV News" and "MTV Network" should not be wiki-linked because they are already done so earlier
 * Reference 11 – "Musicnotes.com" should not be italicized because it is not a print source
 * References 18, 28 – "Yahoo! Music" should not be italicized because it is not a print source
 * References 22, 25, 26, 49 – "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" should not be wiki-linked per above
 * Reference 28 – Should not be wiki-linked because it is already used in references section
 * Reference 48 – Idolator does not need to be wiki-linked per above

Overall review
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. It is a very nice article and is close to reaching good article status. However, there are mistakes above affecting the prose quality of the article as well as the "References" section, which needs some work. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or discuss the items you believe do not affect good article status until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ( talk2me ) 16:17, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 01:57, 8 August 2011 (UTC)