Talk:Yehudi lights/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 15:35, 23 January 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 15:35, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:45, 23 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox;
 * Yehudi lights have again attracted interest; again in the sense, at present, also this is never discussed in the body.
 * See the whole paragraph in "Later developments", except the first sentence.


 * Section 1 & 2; All good
 * Thanks.


 * Section 3;
 * director of technical services; use capitals for initialization; Director of Technical Services
 * Done.


 * What is the necessity of quote? Merge it with general prose
 * Done.


 * Link "US Army Air Force"
 * Done.


 * Abbreviate units from the second mention
 * I think we should either abbreviate all of them or none; I prefer the words.


 * used lforward-pointing lamps; "lforward"?
 * Fixed.


 * Section 4; all good
 * Thanks.


 * File:PBY Catalina landing.jpg doesn't have appropriate summary
 * Extended summary on Commons.


 * One dead link identified
 * Added archive link.


 * 1% confidence, violation unlikely, well done.
 * Good work, Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 07:08, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 27 January 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 10:47, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:36, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 10:47, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:36, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:36, 2 February 2017 (UTC)