Talk:Yellow-faced honeyeater/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sabine's Sunbird (talk · contribs) 05:12, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

I'll take this one on. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  05:12, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Not too many problems. Some comments....

Lead
The lead should follow general structure of the article, Sabine's Sunbird  talk  02:37, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I moved vocalization to after description, as per the body, but I think breeding follows logically after migration Marj (talk) 05:52, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Taxonmy

 * Probably worth mentioning that it was placed in the genus Sylvia when first described by Latham. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  02:46, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Added, and added in taxobox as a synonym Marj (talk) 05:46, 28 November 2011 (UTC)


 * With regards to origin of the name and the yellow stripe, it isn't clear whether the stripe is yellow coloured skin or feathers or both. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  02:46, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "Greek words meaning "gold" and "face" in reference to the stripe of yellow feathers" Marj (talk) 05:46, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Ignore me I'm clearly having a blonde moment! Sabine's Sunbird  talk  05:48, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Description

 * The weight you give seems pretty vague. HBW gives the weight range as 12.5-20.5 g form males and 15-20 g for the females of the nominate race, 17-17.5 m and 15-16 f (samueli) and 14-17.2 m and 13.8-15.8 (barroni). Sabine's Sunbird  talk  05:26, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Checked HANZAB - this exactly what is given there, the section on subspecies doesn't give specific sizes. If you have reference details I can change it ...Marj (talk) 05:52, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It's the Higgins and Christis ref - I can add it tomorrow when I give this a thorough run through. At the moment I am reading both the article and my own source, hope waiting a day isn't too much of a problem. Sabine's Sunbird   talk  05:56, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Not at all - I'd like your advice on how to deal with the not-always-recognised subspecies too.Marj (talk) 05:58, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I think the way it is done here is fairly good. barroni is particularly marginal according to HBW, I can add that if you don't have HBW and cite it. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  06:05, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * That would be great - I don't have it, a previous editor cited it. Marj (talk) 07:33, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I have added weight ranges and information on the subspecies lack of definition for you and cited it to my source. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  02:29, 28 November 2011 (UTC)


 * In the field there are no visible differences between the subspecies. - Should be paired up with Male and female birds are similar, with the male being slightly larger. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  05:26, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Combined sentences on similarity. Marj (talk) 05:52, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

Review

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Nice stuff. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  04:07, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Nice stuff. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  04:07, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Nice stuff. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  04:07, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Nice stuff. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  04:07, 29 November 2011 (UTC)

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