Talk:Yevadu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 04:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article, thank you. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Image Review
✅ I changed the direction from horizontal to vertical and i believe that should be the better option. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * In the filming section, can you crop the Ramoji pic to Vizag's size? You can also enlarge the Vizag pic to Ramoji's size. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 05:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Lead
✅ Added the note for Sankranthi. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Can you create a notelist and explain what Sankaranthi means for those who might not understand waht it is? — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:23, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Plot

 * Look fine. No noticeable change here. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:23, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Development
✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "He said, "Since I produced Vamsi's earlier two films, I was all eager to score a hat-trick with him. Vamsi narrated to me an exciting plot and I was hooked to the unique script that also had a commercial angle. We approached Ram Charan and Chiranjeevi and got their nod in just one sitting"" — You can insert all of this as a grey block quote. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:23, 20 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "Devi Sri Prasad was confirmed as the film's music director in early November 2011, marking his first collaboration with both Paidipally and Charan." — Insert the source for this sentence. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:25, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * We already have a reference from Sify there. Check number 8. It was used for "Devi Sri Prasad was confirmed as the film's music director in early November 2011, marking his first collaboration with both Paidipally and Charan. The music sittings were held at Goa". Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:13, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Ok then. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 06:17, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Casting
✅ Removed. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "During the film's launch, Charan said that the film would not have been possible if Arjun had not accepted the part." — Looks more like puffery (peacockry). Remove it. —  Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:27, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "who was reportedly paid a remuneration of ₹ 6 million," Is the info there in reference no. 28? If it is then leave it as it is. If not, find a RS for it. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:34, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * It is in the ref no. 28. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC) ✅ Removed. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:22, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "It was rumored that" can be rephrased as "It was speculated that". — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:36, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * ", he explained, "I am super excited because of the script. It's a superb narrative and I have a great role in it too. For a change, I am not the bad cop, but an honest one."". — Just the phrase, "Murali Sharma was selected for a supporting role" would suffice. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:36, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Filming

 * "After this first round of production, Charan would go back to Bangkok" — Rephrase it as "After this first phase of production, Charan was scheduled to go back to Bangkok" — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:49, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "The film's team left for Switzerland on 20 May 2013, in order to film a song" — Add "sequence" after "song". — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:49, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Peter Hein. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:49, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "under the supervision of Shekhar", "under the supervision of Johnny" — Who are they? Choreographers? if so rephrase both the sentences as " Later, a song choreographed by Shekhar, and featuring Charan and Haasan was shot at Annapurna 7 Acres Studio.", "The song Freedom which was choreographed by Johnny, was shot in early July 2013 at Ramoji Film City." —  Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:49, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

✅ All Rephrased. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 07:12, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Release

 * "its complete collection" — Please specify what collection the sentence refers to. —  Ssven2  speak 2 me 04:54, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * It prefers to the collection of the paid premier show held on 11 January 2014. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 07:15, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Write that info. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 11:16, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:23, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Legal Issues

 * "Vamsi called the charges baseless, "We have no clue which poster he is referring to. If he is talking about the one featuring Amy Jackson in a two-piece bikini with Charan, it was from a song. There was absolutely no obscenity in it. We will handle this legally."" — explain Vamsi's defence. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 05:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "Just before the release of Race Gurram (2014), stills of Shruti Haasan from the song Pimple Dimple, taken from obscene angles, were leaked on the internet. Shruti received huge criticism for the photos, while some called it a cheap publicity stunt. Regarding them, she said "What really bothers me is that these stills were not preapproved by the production house or me. Those pics were shot on location while I was shooting for a song. And like it happens with most pictures that are shot when you are dancing, some of these were taken from unflattering angles. They were never meant to be released and should have been deleted right away." She added, "I am filing an FIR in Hyderabad. I want to get to the bottom of this issue and I want to know who uploaded the pictures. Someone has to take responsibility. I don't know a world beyond cinema. This is where I have grown up and I trust people here like I would trust my own family. This is a breach of trust."" — Explain the sentences rather than placing them as quotes. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 05:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Do you mean to rewrite them? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 07:15, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I meant that you must write about the news rather than just quoting. Yes, rewrite. —  Ssven2  speak 2 me 11:14, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ Rewrote it. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:21, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Critical response
Can you reduce some of the quotes as per WP:QUOTEFARM, and explain the critics' statements in your own words? You can do that for the newspapers. Reduce especially Oneindia, and IndiaGlitz should not be in italics. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 05:14, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I did it, but i am not sure. Have a look and give suggestions if any. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:32, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks better now. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 14:41, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

If you address these concerns, then the article is passed. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 05:14, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Congratulations! Yevadu has passed. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 14:44, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 14:46, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * How the fuck did it pass NPOV check with this claptrap included, highlighted in a pull quote none-the-less "I was all eager to score a hat-trick with him. Vamsi narrated to me an exciting plot and I was hooked" ???--  TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom  17:17, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You are right. Missed out on that one. I removed it myself. —  Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 06:35, 18 February 2015 (UTC)