Talk:Yia Yia Mary's/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 18:28, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article. Glad the AFD failed. Anyway, happy new year!  Gerald WL  18:28, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks. You, too! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:22, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , same instances of wrong referrals in the body.  Gerald WL  17:17, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , ??? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:21, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , for example, in the Description section, there is still "Yia Yia Mary's was..."  Gerald WL  17:23, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , Sorry, I don't understand the problem. (?) --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:28, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , fuck! I just realized I went reply-link on the wrong section. Was referring to the "Lead" part, about the "were" not "was" thing. Apologies.  Gerald WL  17:31, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , I'm still not sure what the problem is, but I'll say I think it is ok to refer to Yia Yia Mary's as a singular business with two locations. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:35, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Also, I plan to nominate this article for a review from the Guild of Copy Editors, so they may have some feedback on were vs. was. Hopefully the writing is good enough to meet GA status. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:36, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

Actually, I've changed "were" back to "was". I think generally the article should present Yia Yia Mary's as a singular business with two locations. I've updated the opening sentence accordingly. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:39, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , you have to be patient in GOCE. They take the oldest nominations first, then slowly to the newest, which will become the oldest eventually. If you're really planning for GOCE, I'll have the was/were exempt from this GAN right now.  Gerald WL  17:41, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I'll give you a chance to re-read and do some polishes.  Gerald WL  17:42, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , I nominate my articles for review at GOCE all the time and I am very familiar with the process. You'll see almost every single GA I've written has been reviewed. Not all of the PDX restaurant articles in my recent blitz have been reviewed yet, but I plan to nominate each of them as the queue allows. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:43, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I feel very good about the current text. I always nominate for GOCE reviews even when I'm comfortable with what I've written, the extra eyes don't hurt. Please let me know if you have any other concerns for this GA review, thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:46, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , if you think it's all good, then it's all good for me too. Greece has always been one of my favorite countries, so I feel energized reviewing this. Should probably join WP:GREECE. Keep rocking!  Gerald WL  18:00, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 18:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

Lead

 * All good, although would note that with the length of the body, it could be perhaps stretched out a bit.  Gerald WL  18:28, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Probably "were", not "was".  Gerald WL  15:47, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:34, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

Description

 * I would rather have the "wildly ecelctic" etc stuff be the reception of the restaurant, as opposed to the description. Move only if you think it doesn't break the sentence.  Gerald WL  16:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , I've generally always included commentary on interior/menu in the Description section and opinions re: food/service in the Reception section. I'd say the "wildly eclectic" quote applies to Description. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:36, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "Greek music played in the background"-- slang-y. Change it to, perhaps, "The restaurant also plays Greek music."  Gerald WL  16:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Changed to "The restaurant played Greek music in the background." --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:37, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

History

 * Perhaps link noise reduction in "lowering the noise level"?  Gerald WL  16:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:38, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "The Yia Yia Mary's at Hobby Airport closed in May, and the Uptown restaurant closed in June." So perhaps adjust the Closed parameter of the infobox to "May and June 2020"?  Gerald WL  16:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:42, 1 January 2021 (UTC)