Talk:Yifat Bitton

Expansion
To Do: A personal life section A Picture
 * Clarify what the Hadassah prize is, and how important it is (or isn't). (see the New Israel Fund UK 2014 report mentioning what appears to be the same award)
 * Add information on her judicial career. She apparently was a judge on the Lod District Court
 * Clarify the name, work and structure of Tmurah
 * Flesh out her opinions on the social issues she fights for, such as discrimination against the mirzahi for example
 * Clarify her degrees and education, as well as her teaching/lecturing activities

does this count as a WIR triumph if there was no prior redlink? Hydromania (talk) 09:26, 28 June 2019 (UTC)

Please review
Hey , You seem to be pretty prolific editors at Wikiproject:Israel. Would you mind taking a look at this article and improving it? Hydromania (talk) 23:09, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Hydromania,
 * Thanks for creating the article. It gives a good basic overview of the subject, but there are a few problems with the style:
 * The article is more of a list of points than prose
 * It uses time-sensitive phrasing (e.g. "curretly")
 * In places, it's written in a promotional tone (note: if you have a personal connection to the subject, disclosure is mandatory)
 * The sections are organized in a way that highlights the subject's career, instead of being in chronological order
 * Hope this helps with improving the article in general, and the DYK nomination in particular.
 * —Ynhockey (Talk) 16:57, 7 July 2019 (UTC)