Talk:Yin Yoga/GA2

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:59, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Another one of your interesting articles :) I'll post my comments soon. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)


 * that are held for longer periods of time Makes me wonder longer compared to what
 * Fixed.


 * Traditional Chinese Medicine Why in capitalized case?
 * Lower case it is.


 * the tendons, fasciae, and ligaments Could use some links here
 * Added.


 * Why so many refs in the lead? Anything from here missing in the main text?
 * Moved 'em out.


 * 'Yin Yoga' appears a bit too much in the lead, especially the last para
 * Slimmed down.


 * In the lead 'Taoist Yoga' needs to be linked on first mention and the other name 'Tao yin' used in the main text could probably be added here as well.
 * Linked first mention and added other name.


 * yin-style poses What exactly are those? Is it the same as yin asanas—mostly sitting or lying postures? This explanation should then come earlier in the article
 * Reworded.


 * Not sure why we have 2 paras in Roots in India and China
 * Closed up.


 * Taoist Alchemy Why does alchemy start with 'A'?
 * Fixed.


 * Earth, Metal, Water, Wood, and Fire Should these start with capital letters?
 * Yes, as these are the names of traditional elements.


 * The yoga teacher Paul Grilley sought Zink out and studied with him When was this?
 * Added.


 * Who is Garry Parker?
 * Glossed.


 * Japanese scholar and yogi 'yogi' is a Sanskrit word giving the impression of a hermit, and I'm not sure everyone will grasp what it means.. should we say yoga practitioner instead?
 * Not really, but done.


 * meridians, or subtle pathways and vessels A link for meridian would be good as in the lead
 * Done.


 * parallel concepts of the nadi pathways nadi is in italics here but not in the lead
 * Formatted.


 * Duplinks - Chinese medicine (Paul Grilley), hatha yoga (Yin and yang)
 * Removed.


 * Because yin yoga does not make practitioners hot it needs to be 'Yin Yoga' consistently
 * Done.


 * Two pics in the gallery at the bottom lack inline citations
 * Added.


 * The date formats in refs could be more consistent (dmy/mdy, just year or just month or full date)
 * Done.


 * URL in ref 4 is not working
 * Removed.


 * ref. 37 needs page numbers
 * Replaced ref.

That's all I guess. Another lovely read :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 14:02, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks!
 * Nice work. 2 GAs in a day :D Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 16:04, 18 April 2020 (UTC)