Talk:Yolanda Andrade

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 27 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Valencia0012.

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Peer Review
Yolanda's career pathway is very well detailed and provides a good account of her experiences as an actress. I noted that there is a spelling mistake "actriz" was placed instead of "actress". In regards to the lead paragraph, it should include an explanation of why her work has been impacting, why is she considered a radical woman? You want to make sure that the reader is able to understand the most important information about this individual from the first paragraph.

Also, add any information related to her career. Did she have experiences that influenced her career? Was there a particular intention for pursuing a career as an actress? Are there any similarities with the roles that she plays?

The television section was well organized with the division of shows/operas. You also want to make sure that you are adding the citations in the sentences in which you use them. You definitely want to add more sources so that you obtain a neutral standpoint.

Great job thus far though! Keep up the good work :)

```` Lupita Valencia ```` — Preceding unsigned comment added by Valencia0012 (talk • contribs) 04:52, 16 February 2019 (UTC)