Talk:You're No Good (Jesse Fuller song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)

This can be completed by me within a day! --K. Peake 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * No infobox here is acceptable since it could be disputed which one would belong at the top
 * "that appeared as the first track" → "that first appeared as the opening track"
 * Mention the release year of Dylan's eponymous album
 * Add a sentence after the first one about how Dylan recorded eight takes
 * "Dylans version is more" → "Dylan's version is more"
 * Change the although part to simply mentioning that some critics praised its opening track, to avoid too much detail for the lead

Jesse Fuller version

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Mention the release year of "San Francisco Bay Blues"
 * "written and performed by Fuller was" → "written and performed by Fuller, was"
 * "washboard and fotdella" → "washboard, and fotdella"
 * "on the album's back cover." → "on its back cover."
 * "The notes claim that" → "The notes claim,"

Bob Dylan version

 * Pipe John H. Hammond to John Hammond (record producer) in the infobox

Background and recording

 * Pipe John H. Hammond to John Hammond (record producer)
 * ""'cause we were..." should not use double speech marks twice at the start
 * "but this was abandoned after interruptions, and later abandoned" double usage of abandoned reads confusingly; reword this
 * Added some details, which hopefully helps. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:28, 7 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove wikilink on liner notes
 * Remove excess space after "She's No Good"
 * Either remove, replace or add appropriate text to the img per MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE
 * "one of several songs" → "was one of several songs"
 * "me' [in "You're No Good"]"." → "me' [in 'You're No Good']"."
 * I tweaked the wording here a bit. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:39, 7 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "Harvey thinks that" → "Harvey thought that" to be consistent

Reception

 * Either relate the Michael Gray review to the song or remove it
 * "seem likely to have"" → "seem likely to have"."
 * Uncut should be italicised
 * "Robert Shelton wrote about the song" → "Shelton wrote about the song"
 * Why does the Shelton quote have a speech mark at the end when one is not used to start it?
 * Amended. I've also trimmed the quote slightly at both ends. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:47, 7 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "said in a 2022 interview that he had" → "said in a 2022 interview he had"

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this had been in the queue for so long that this review was long overdue! --K. Peake 09:46, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, . Hopefully I've addressed everything, but let me know if more is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:04, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I briefly copyedited but thanks for the quick response! --K. Peake 10:29, 8 December 2022 (UTC)