Talk:You (Regard, Troye Sivan and Tate McRae song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "It was written by the latters" → "It was written by the performers"
 * Mention the teaser and it being their first collaboration before the release sentence
 * "It received critical acclaim from" → "The song received critical acclaim from"
 * Only mention countries it reached "the top 50" in the first sentence since below that is not notable
 * "in the US and" → "in the United States and" per MOS:US, as this is the first mention of the country
 * "The official music video was" → "The accompanying music video was"
 * Remove the word official from YouTube channel because that is obvious for the lead
 * "and the United States." → "and the US."

Background and composition

 * "with Regard uploading a" → "with Regard also uploading a"
 * Regard's elaboration statements seems like it should be the "Collaborating with..." one, as that is the only quote of this in the source
 * [11] should solely be invoked at the end of the sentence
 * "Sivan and Mc Rare sing about" → "Sivan and McRae sing about"
 * "During the lyrics, they sing," → "On the chorus, they sing,"

Reception

 * Only write music critics, omitting the writers part
 * "to him, create an" → "to him, creates an"
 * Remove or replace PopClub per WP:SELFPUB
 * "vocals from them" → "vocals from the singers"
 * "likening the "sultry and" → "appreciating the "sultry and"
 * "an "infatuation and summer" anthem, that" → "an "infatuation" and summer anthem that"
 * "opined that "['You'] is a great" → "opined that "['You'] is [a] great"
 * "should be […] with each artist" → "should be [with] each artist"
 * Only identify the United States chart as Billboard Hot 100
 * "It also peaked atop" → "The song also peaked atop"
 * "more than 500,000 units." → "more than 500,000 certified units in the US." per MOS:US
 * "the Netherlands,[28] Singapore,[29] as well as" → "the Netherlands[28] and Singapore,[29] as well as"

Promotion

 * Wikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
 * I don't think "on 14 June" is needed when you mentioned the date a sentence before the later part
 * "and controlling the video." → "and taking control."
 * "who's face is covered" → "whose face is covered"
 * "Tate was in Los Angeles," → "Tate was in LA," per the source wording
 * "a really cool idea"." → "a really cool idea."" per MOS:QUOTE
 * The black setting and LED wall parts are unsourced
 * "of MTV's Video Music Awards" → "of the MTV Video Music Awards"

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Are you sure this section can't be created?<
 * Done. Iaof2017 (talk) 18:53, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Weekly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * Remove US Dance/Mix Show Airplay Songs per WP:USCHARTS

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly! --K. Peake 09:16, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello glad to hear from you again and thanks for your continuous work. I think I responded to everything. Cheers. Iaof2017 (talk) 19:12, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * The only problem I have now is that you have not changed Regard's elaboration quote in background to the one the source mentions, "Collaborating with Troye and Regard was an amazing experience. It's a totally different vibe than any of my usual songs, but still has the emotional and lyrical depth that I always try to write." --K. Peake 20:25, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Fixed . Iaof2017 (talk) 23:07, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, looks a lot better well done! --K. Peake 07:03, 25 October 2022 (UTC)