Talk:You Can Dance/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:40, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

GA reviews are a good distraction from studying for exams...

Lead

 * The release is not included in the body of the article
 * It is there, in the chart performance section. However a typo was there which I corrected. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Better. I thought it had a different release date or something... Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Background

 * I recommend a bit more wikifying, including Warner Bros. and the different instruments
 * Did some, take a looky. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Development

 * The transition from musical development into album art in the second paragraph is quite stiff. Break it up or smooth it out somehow.
 * Break added. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * It seems more natural to break it up before you mention the album cover (ie after "with only the high-hat left to keep time.")
 * My bad, sorry. I meant to break from that only. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 07:35, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Composition

 * Wouldn't the audio sample be more appropriate here?
 * I agree. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "After the first verse, the sound of keyboard is heard during the effect." - link (the?) keyboard, what you have linked to doesn't seem to be right - 'you can hear the keyboard when it is in chorus with other instruments' is the idea I took from the sentence, which doesn't sit quite right. (Or maybe I'm just reading something wrong...)
 * Oops, it should have been chorus — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Link violin
 * "According to the sheet music published at SheetMusicPlus.com..." - is this preamble really needed?
 * This was needed as per a discussion at WP:RSN that sheet music should be made a treelink, and the publisher should be included. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "...spanning from the notes of C5 to B♭m" now the only musical experience I have is a few months of piano lessons, but C5 and B♭m surely aren't parallel... what I'm trying to say is 'why doesn't B♭m have a number next to it?'
 * The sheet shows B♭5 to it, which I believed was the minor chord. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 07:32, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * I hardly know what I'm going on about, so I'll take your worl for it :). Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:35, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Link middle eight.
 * linked. — <i style="color:blue;">Legolas</i> ( talk 2 me ) 07:32, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * " Blender magazine reviewer Tony Power rated it one star..." out of?
 * Emphasized. — <i style="color:blue;">Legolas</i> ( talk 2 me ) 07:32, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * Not sure about these chart positions "reached a peak of 14" - shouldn't there be a 'number' before each position
 * you're right.

Track listing

 * Source for writers and producers?
 * Added.

Credits and personnel

 * Source?
 * Added.