Talk:You Have 0 Friends/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:10, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

I've got this one.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 01:10, 10 September 2013 (UTC)

OK, here I go...

I'll put the article on hold so the concerns may be addressed.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 21:55, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The plot section is overly long. Read WP:TVPLOT - it should be between 200 to 500 characters.
 * Plot section is now 494 words. 和DITOR  E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Nothing about the production of the episode?
 * Has been added 和DITOR  E tails 14:51, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * This cultural reference are unsourced: "The sad clown painting in Kip's room is likely a reference to the original "The Sims" PC game, in which if a similar painting is present and a sim is depressed, a clown will appear and attempt to cheer them up (though will fail miserably and depress them further)."
 * Removed 和DITOR  E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The home release section is small and should be merged with another section, like "reception".
 * Merge into release section 和DITOR  E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 15:08, 21 September 2013 (UTC)