Talk:You Lost Me/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wikipedian Penguin (talk · contribs) 23:28, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

I promised the nominator that I would take on this review. Sorry about the delay, but I'll get started as soon as I'm free. The Wikipedian Penguin 23:28, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

Spotcheck and sources


 * "In August 2008, Australian recording artist Sia Furler confirmed that she would work on several ballads for Aguilera's then-upcoming 'futuristic' album."&mdash;quotation regarding "futuristic" is in neither of the sources cited.
 * removed.


 * "On June 22, 2010, 'You Lost Me' was announced to be released as the third single in the US and the second internationally from Bionic..."&mdash;source does not go into this much detail.


 * The song is a pop ballad and lasts for a duration of 4:17 (four minutes and 17 seconds)."&mdash;none of the sources say this is pop. The iTunes ref says the album in general is pop only.


 * "Aguilera performed 'You Lost Me' for the first time at the season finale of the ninth season of American Idol on May 26, 2010."&mdash;not mentioned that it's the ninth season.
 * added reference.


 * "According to James Dinh from MTV News, the performance of 'You Lost Me' was the best during the show..."&mdash;Dinh doesn't say it's the best.


 * What makes Neon Limelight a reliable source? The Wikipedian Penguin 21:37, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * &mdash; Simon (talk) 10:37, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Note: I have begun copy editing the article and will post comments here if required. The Wikipedian Penguin 13:46, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Prose


 * "The track is a down-tempo ballad that talks about an unfaithful man, who has left Aguilera's world 'infected'."&mdash;quotation needs to be cited.
 * It's in the lead, so I think it does not need to be cited? &mdash; Simon (talk) 04:48, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Quotations are an exception. The Wikipedian Penguin 22:56, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * &mdash; Simon (talk) 09:00, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

, if there aren't any more notes, can you make a decision and close the review?--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 23:26, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I'll finish up ASAP. The Wikipedian Penguin 01:45, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

I think I can pass this article as a GA now. I'm sorry for taking so long. I had no idea that real life would creep up on me so badly, but congratulations nonetheless. The Wikipedian Penguin 01:58, 20 November 2013 (UTC)