Talk:Young Girls/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! Review of this coming soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * by Bruno Mars, Philip Lawrence and Ari Levine, Jeff Bhasker, and Emile Haynie -> by The Smeezingtons and Emile Haynie
 * and reminiscent of the song "It Will Rain" and Lana Del Rey's work -> It is reminiscent of his previous song, "It Will Rain" and was noted by critics for its similarities to Lana Del Rey's works.
 * Its music is largely -> Its instrumentation is mainly
 * to Contemporary hit radio -> to contemporary hit radio
 * complex instrumental -> complex instrumentation
 * record -> recording; record is generally used for album releases
 * Its lyrics, detail the fact of the singer being unable to resist to his attraction to young girls were met with criticism; with reviewers calling it a "recognizing sin" and "impassioned shame" -> Its lyrics, portraying the singer's attraction to young girls, were met with criticism...
 * in some -> in few
 * the released -> the release
 * Korea where it succeed by peaking a the top position -> Korea, where it reached number one
 * as the second single -> as the second single release for Unorthodox Jukebox
 * at 62 and 23 -> at number 63 and number 23
 * the position of 19 -> the top twenty
 * and 32 -> and number 32
 * certified gold -> certified Gold
 * the US -> that territory
 * The track was performed live sometimes -> The track was performed several times live, including
 * The song was only performed three times live, that doesn't account for several...maybe other word? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:24, 18 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Background and writing
 * Link MTV to its own article
 * interview Mars -> interview, Mars

More to come... Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:04, 16 June 2016 (UTC)