Talk:Your Love (Nicki Minaj song)/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 14:19, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Thank you :)!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 20:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

First comments

 * Lead
 * "however when the song" >> "but when the song"
 * Done

Nothing else by now.
 * I think that the information about the remixes doesn't belong to the background section. That paragraph goes better on composition.
 * Done

— Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 20:19, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

— Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 21:12, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Add. comments
 * I changed the picture of Lennox. I hope you don't mind.
 * The rest of the article seems to be in good shape. I'll be checking the references late.
 * Alright, great!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 21:58, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

More comments

 * Lead
 * Billboard Hot 100 should be wikilinked, since its the 1st time you mention it.
 * Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs, the same as above.
 * Done


 * Background
 * "After being mixed differently and rewriting some of the lyrics", confusing tense. Better if wrote: "and some lyrics rewritten,"
 * Done

Ok, those are the last i see as prose. I'll check the refs. —Hahc 21 16:24, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright!--(CA)Giacobbe (talk) 17:16, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict
—Hahc 21 17:45, 17 June 2012 (UTC)