Talk:Your Song (Rita Ora song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:31, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Reunited again for the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 07:31, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "with many highlighting Ora's" → "who mostly highlighted Ora's"
 * "and the song's music and lyrics." → "and the music and lyrics." to avoid overusage of the song
 * "reaching the top 10" mention this was in countries such as, then listing those three and edit the top 50 count accordingly for any fellow top 10 positions listed there
 * "as well asquintuple platinum" → "as well as quintuple platinum"
 * "premiered to Ora's YouTube channel on" → "premiered to YouTube on" since this is too much info for the lead
 * "Ora performed the song at" → "Ora performed it in 2017 at"
 * The Ellen DeGeneres Show and The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon should be stylized with uppercase T's per MOS:THEMUSIC on titles

Background and composition

 * Img looks good!
 * In the second sentence, use the title in the first part rather than the second instance
 * "She further commented that "Ed" → "She further commented, "Ed" per this being a full sentence and also move the punctuation inside the quote marks for MOS:QUOTE
 * I don't think the second album introduction is needed per this being mentioned in the lead and if so, change to Ora's instead of her
 * "by singing lines such as" → "by singing lines such as,"
 * "I'm in love"." → "I'm in love.""

Critical reception

 * "Ludovic Hunter-Tilney from Financial Times" → "Ludovic Hunter-Tilney from the Financial Times"
 * the Independent → The Independent per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * the Line of Best Fit → The Line of Best Fit per above
 * "detected the song to "tappe into" → "detected the song "tapped into" per the source
 * the New York Times → The New York Times
 * "experience' than that"." → "experience' than that."" per MOS:QUOTE
 * AllMusic should not be italicised

Commercial performance

 * The debut position is not mentioned by the source
 * Add that it was Ora's second most successful song in the country per the source
 * "peaked atop the" → "peaked atop the Billboard"
 * "of Belgium, Ireland, and Scotland." → "of Belgium, Ireland and Scotland."

Music video and promotion

 * Img looks good!
 * "The accompanying music video for "Your Song" was" → "The accompanying music video was"
 * "on 28 June." → "on 28 June 2017."
 * "in reverse through the city" should be London per the source
 * "the Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon on 18 July and the Ellen DeGeneres Show" → "The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon on 18 July and The Ellen DeGeneres Show" per MOS:THEMUSIC, also where is the Fallon one sourced?

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)

Certifications

 * Certifications for "Your Song" → Certifications and sales for "Your Song"

Release history

 * Remove United Kingdom from this table since no release format is specified

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went quickly and was smooth! --K. Peake 20:06, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Hey thank you for another review. I will start addressing the issues within the forthcoming 24 hours, as I am currently on vacation. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:29, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Hey again, I have fixed the issues now. If you encounter any further problems, please let me know. Thanks! Iaof2017 (talk) 13:02, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I only edited the typo so great job! --K. Peake 16:24, 11 August 2023 (UTC)