Talk:Youth For Lateral Kindness

Peer Review of Youth for Lateral Kindness Article
Overall it's a clear and informative article. There is room for improvement in terms of general proofreading for grammar (like always capitalizing Youth for Lateral Kindness and maybe rewording some things to sound more academic). The lead section is good but could be a bit more specific I think; like what is "lateral violence"? What kind of "group" are they? Political, activist? I know there is more detail in the later sections but just from the lead people should have a good sense of what it is. Also, in general, unless it's necessary it's better not to use quotes in your Wikipedia article, from what I understand. You can easily just use those sources to write the same information in your own words. The sources in general look good, except maybe you could find a better one than a CBC News article for info about the founders of the group? Great job! Amoiseyeva (talk) 04:13, 18 October 2018 (UTC)