Talk:Youth Olympic Games/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk • contribs • count ) 18:49, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:49, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "lasted 12 days; the winter version" should be comma
 * "14–15 years, and" remove the and
 * "Finally no nation" comma after finally.
 * "The election was held on February 10, 2010, 2 days before the start" two days.

Just a couple small things. I'll put the article on hold and pass when they're fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:11, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I've fixed the punctuation mistakes. Cheers Delusion23 (talk) 10:56, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 17:48, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review and the work, I was away from my computer for a few days and missed the review. Appreciate the team effort.  H1nkles (talk) citius altius fortius 15:43, 19 September 2011 (UTC)