Talk:Youth With A Mission/Archive 1

Expert Needed Tag
I added the expert needed tag. The article needs more elaboration on the history of YWAM. Little important points such as Mercy Ships breaking off from YWAM because it was too big and Marine Reach resulting as those in Mercy Ships wanting to remain with YWAM etc. I know of these facts but cannot relate them with authority enough. Those enlightened enough please expand. Davidkazuhiro 10:33, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Cult researchers
I don't beleive Rick A. Ross Institute is a good reference for criticism of YWAM, as other cult researchers do not endorse Rick Ross. Apologetics Index is one example (http://www.apologeticsindex.org/r24.html), and they indicate "many cult experts refuse to work with - or to refer people to - Rick Ross" though I have not checked this personally.

Apologetics Index gives a more balanced criticism of YWAM while still submitting that they even are not neutral. (http://www.apologeticsindex.org/y05.html) However, they do their best to balance their personal opinions by giving references where possible.

User:82.133.81.53 10:10, 7 November 2005


 * Keep the Rick Ross links & include relevant others. Cult research appears to very much a viper's nest - the level of mutual antagonism between different individuals/groups is very high. This is before you include those that appear to be apologists for various cults.


 * The positive thing about Rick Ross is that he appears the most open of them. None of them seem to be particularly strong academically.

Paul foord 22:56, 25 November 2005 (UTC)


 * I agree with the Cult research appearing to be very week, lacking strong academic evidence, and the high mutual antagonism between Cult researchers.


 * For this topic however, these critics have voiced their judgement of YWAM and they should be left here for reference. We don’t need this topic becoming controversial and been pulled into the viper's nest of the Cult research. There will always be strengths and weaknesses with any organisational structure, and the delocalisation of control has its benefits and weaknesses.

Super Keo 10:02, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

82.143.162.72 18:18, 22 January 2006 (UTC) There should be a reference in the text of the entry, not just in the links, that YWAM has been compared to a sect or cult and has faced serious criticism. One has now been added.

82.143.162.72 13:26, 2 February 2006 (UTC) The term 'the delocalisation of control among the organisation' does not really put the whole story across. The extremely heavy emphasis on unquestioned authority is what courts criticism. Shouldn't this be mentioned in the article? Delocalisation exists in quite a number of organisations without leading to the sort of controversy YWAM is involved in.

Moral Government Theology Link
I've taken the MGT link out because it is not referring to the same theological idea (although they do go by the same name). The MGT that is referred to in the article was popularized in the late 1960's and early 70's and is not a held belief of any denomination that I am aware of. A different MGT article needs to be written on it (because they are not the same), and i may do that one day.

Why would an important link be removed? This action is dishonest. Understanding the MGT foundation in YWAM is essential in understanding the present emphasis on spiritual warfare and the wide distribution that YWAM promotes for Dr. Gregory Boyd's books on the "Openness of God." One of the things about true Christians is that they love truth, even if it hurts! I would suggest that people who want to know the truth run a check on Goggle with something like --ywam, false teaching, moral government theology. Read and study, it won't hurt you to know the truth about YWAM. Then if you still want to join, you will go in with your eyes open and will be able to discern the error if you come across it. Here is one place that much about YWAM history is documented —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.103.181.174 (talk • contribs)


 * A personal website does not meet WP:RS for inclusion. But I did link and mention it from another source. All criticism MUST be cited for inclusion. While your free to add material make sure it is cited with WP:RS.


 * Other segements of the article need serious clean up as well. Arbusto 19:49, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

It was not dishonost to remove the link, it would be like talking about (modern day) computers and linking to a site that discussed computers of the 1980's, the comparison is so far out there that even though they are 'similar' they are completely different! As for the controversy section, deleting it was dishonost (to whomever did it - i don't know who)!! I realize that it went out of hand (and 'preachy') but editing it would have been the honost thing to do! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xnowimcoolx  (talk • contribs)  19:06, 14 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Actually, per WP:EL, it was appropriate to remove the MG link. However, the link does contain articles that would meet muster as reputable sources. My suggestion is to create a Criticisms section of this article and incorporate cited material into it. Peace. CyberAnth 02:58, 6 October 2006 (UTC)

Discipleship Training School/Merge?

 * Merge Interrelated suject, not enough sources for its own article. Fails notablity on its own. Arbusto 16:21, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

yeah, merge them - two seperate article for that in unnessicary. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xnowimcoolx (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

Yes, they should be merged. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.75.129.37 (talk) 00:06, 16 September 2006 (UTC)

Why no "Controversies" section?
It needs one. The previous reverted controversy section clearly read like a personal rant than material for an encyclopedia article; still, this article needs one. CyberAnth 01:42, 6 October 2006 (UTC)

Merge discussion per AfD
Per this AfD discussion, it is recommended that Australian Relief & Mercy Services be merged into this article. ··· 日本穣 ? · Talk to Nihon joe 21:37, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

Category:YWAMer Wikipedians
If you wish to be part of the Category:YWAMer Wikipedians - to add yourself to this category just add to the bottom of your user page. CyberAnth 21:23, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

KKI
I am making a stub for Kings Kids International. Does any one think it should be merged with this page —Preceding unsigned comment added by Saksjn (talk • contribs) 05:39, March 1, 2007
 * We should at least have a subsection mentioning it and linking to your stub --Davidkazuhiro 09:10, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

External Link Consensus
In the past people have often added links to YWAM websites in the external links section until it is extremely long and out of proportion. Wikipedian editors have had to continuously maintain this with no consensus to go by. This was one of the reasons I created the List of YWAM bases page so that there would be a place for this list and it would not detriment from the YWAM article.

However, the List of YWAM bases is going to be deleted soon since it's job is already being done by the YWAM Directory and the list will tend to go out of date. I have included a link to the YWAM Directory in anticipation of this deletion. The question I want to raise then is this:

What limits shall we agree on for the External Links section? What qualifies to be on the list and what are we going to leave up to the YWAM website? If we can agree on this, we would have a handy policy for editors to refer to when maintaining and evaluating additions to the external links section. --Davidkazuhiro 03:35, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Heretical Teaching
I intend to add a Heretical Doctrine sub-section stating the teachings of former YWAM teacher Gordon C. Olson. He taught:

1. God does not have an unchangeable character. God is good only because He chooses to be good. He could choose to be evil if he wanted. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception: A Biblical Examination of the Moral Government Theology, page 11.

2. Man is not born as a slave to sin. He can choose to live a holy life, apart from Jesus Christ and the Holy Spirit. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception: A Biblical Examination of the Moral Government Theology, pages 25-26, 44-46

3. The death of Jesus Christ did not literally pay for the sins of all mankind. It was just a warning to show mankind that God is not happy with sin. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception: A Biblical Examination of the Moral Government Theology, page 24

These beliefs starkly contradict the Bible and all the great Christian creeds.

The source is: The False God and Gospel of Moral Government Theology by E. Calvin Beisner, Christian Research Journal, Fall 1994 (This is a respectable source. See Christian Research Institute).

Beisner is backed-up by Dr. Alan Gomes, now a Professor at the respectable Biola University. Read Lead Us Not Into Deception: A Biblical Examination of the Moral Government Theology -found at Youth With a Mission (YWAM) and elsewhere - PDF format

---L B Brown 07:00, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

Can you back this up? My family has been in YWAM for years and has never encountered this kind of teaching. We have heard just the opposite. We have encountered the authoritarianism before, and the base at which we experienced that (Elm Springs) is no longer a YWAM base. If the accusation is true please provide us with sources and names so that we can address the issue. Thanks. Saksjn 17:04, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

Gordon Olsen was never a YWAM leader. he was an elderly gentleman who loved the Lord. He did speak in the SOE in Lausanne in 1978. His manual, "Sharing Your Faith" copyright 1976, published by Bible Research Fellowship Inc. Illinois taught neither 1 nor 2. It taught the unchangeable character of God, the utmost depravity of humanity see: W-Me-I-15 to page W-Me-I-19 and the utter necessity for a Spirit-filled life:  " The Holy Spirit, as the delegated Agent of the Godhead takes the initiative to transform the whole personality of the repentant sinner through the application of the of the atoning sufferings of Christ and the gift of His energizing presence". see W-ME-X-7. The manual presented Bible studies, mostly a study of verses, themes and words, not a theological treatise. The study had been influenced by the Systematic Theology of the New England revivalist, Rev Charles Finney, of whose life Mr Olsen was an authority.Issakara 22:42, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

I can see that you guys have not even bothered to click on the Alan Gomes file, so here it is again: Lead Us Not Into Deception: A Biblical Examination of the Moral Government Theology. Read the foreword and pages 1-3, 11, 24-26, 44-46 to start with. Moral Government Theology is completely unbiblical and is taught by Winkie Pratney, Harry Conn, Gordon C. Olson, George Otis Jr., and H. Roy Elseth. I did a DTS in Australia in 1995, and I heard a DTS leader say 'God is good because He chooses to be good', with the implication that He could choose to be evil if He wanted. This is complete garbage and a horrendous attack on the character of God. How can anyone love or worship a God Who could suddenly become evil? The biblical view is that God is immutably holy and that it is absolutely impossible for Him to do evil or ever turn into an 'Evil God'.

Dr. Gomes further claims: YWAM leaders have attempted to be evasive when confronted with the presence of these heresies within YWAM. L B Brown 05:47, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
 * At a 1982 meeting with senior YWAM leaders they denied that Moral Government was still taught within YWAM, when Moral Government books were still being sold at YWAM Hawaii. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception, page 3.
 * Senior YWAM leaders claim that the Moral Government heresy is not especially prominent or pervasive within YWAM. This is refuted by testimonials from former YWAMers. Moral Government was widely taught in the Schools of Evangelism in the early 1980s. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception, page 2
 * YWAM leaders attempted to assassinate Dr. Gomes' reputation after he started speaking out about these heresies. Source: Lead Us Not Into Deception, pages 102-103

I was quoting directly from Olsen's manual. I did read Gomes paper. I believe original sources are more authorative than an individual's paper. He never says God's character is changeable, how could he have taught on the moral attributes of the Creator if he believed these could change any time? Such a God would be arbitrary not faithful. Such a teaching does not exist in the manual. Neither does the manual teach man can live a sinless live apart from the power of the Holy Spirit and efficacy of the atonement. I quoted the direct reference for you. Nowhere in ther manual does it imply that the death of Jesus was simply to show God's displeasure about sin. There is a page about the OT sacrificial system and the substitutary nature of the atonement is upheld. I expect honesty and openness to be the rule if we are to have any discussion about this. Bias is not acceptable. 87.112.64.135 10:19, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Furthermore, most studies of the character of God, from whatever framework, will contain a chapter of the 'moral government' of God. Being a person, His government of universe is according to His charachter, namely His revealed moral values.Issakara 10:46, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

I do not appreciate you calling me 'dishonest' and 'biased' just because I am revealing things that YWAM would prefer to hide. The extreme hostility that YWAMers display towards any perceived criticism of YWAM is very telling. YWAM and the leaders within YWAM deserve respect, but they do not deserve to be worshipped as idols. Only God deserves that level of worship.

I am afraid that Dr. Gomes is a very authoritative source. He is a professional theologian who works at Biola University. His findings are supported by another professional theologian; Calvin Beisner. So who should I believe; two professional theologians or this unknown person, Gordon Olson? L B Brown 13:48, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

The above is based on a writing from over 20 years ago and looked at things in the 1970's and 80's. Has there been any recent studies of such teachings in YWAM - including how extensive these teaching may be. There hasn't been much quantifying based on the 1980's paper, so an up-to-date study of how things are now in YWAM which both qualifies and quantifies it's findings would be an idea. --85.211.62.199 14:19, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

I have found a source for the curriculum used in the foundational ywam dts it is on the international dts centre and copyrighted 2002,2005. reference: http://www.ywamdtscentre.com/dts/curriculum.htm#I

I hope this helps this discussion. I am new to wiki editing, please be patient while I learn the ropes, but the I consider the material entered above as very misleading and was shocked to find it there. In Olsens's manual he never taught what he is alleged to have taught here and there is no evidence from Olsen's material cited by Gomes to support such allegations. Gomes study was from the perspective of the Limited Atonement Theory by Leon Morris. That is itself would be considered by many evangelicals as an 'unorthodox doctrine'. Evangelicals generally believe Jesus died a substitutory death for everyone ie 'for the sins of the world', not just for a pre-determined number of sins of a fore-ordained few. Issakara 14:56, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

Quotes from YWAM authors
Absolutely shocking quotes by YWAM authors:

George Otis Jr., in The God They Never Knew:
 * if we accept the premise that Jesus literally purchased our salvation with His blood, it portrays God as vindictive and bloodthirsty (p. 109)
 * The assertion that Jesus paid for our sins has caused immeasurable damage to the Body of Christ (p. 93)
 * sin is not inherited—it comes by choice, it is created (p. 59)

Gordon Olson, in Sharing Your Faith, teaches:
 * God does not require an exact payment for sin to satisfy retributive justice...“God is love” and has completely subdued all thought of retaliation toward rebellious sinners. (p. V-4)
 * The sacrifice of Christ is not the payment of a debt (Historical Opinions, p. 2)
 * Holiness and sin are free voluntary acts of will or states of mind, and, although strongly influenced, are not caused by any internal force of nature, tendency, or instinct, nor by persuasion from external sources.
 * ...a contradiction would exist in the Bible if any statement could be found declaring our guilt for Adam’s sin. (p. IV-5)

H. Roy Elseth in his book Did God Know? asserts:
 * God is good because He chooses to be good....He(God) only is able to do right who is able at the same time to do wrong. (p. 26)

Alan Gomes says: 'This author has talked with countless individuals who have had their faith severely damaged through Moral Government teaching.' L B Brown 19:07, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for this input it helps me to understand what this all about. It appears to be an attempt by two individuals from a reformed christian background to evaluate some non reformed theology and find it falling short of their own perspective on the atonement and character of God. I have looked up some material for you. 1. Moral Government Theology has already got its own WIKI page so an internal reference would inform people what this about and facilitate further research. 2. Complete documents of Finney's theology are to be found on the Calvin College website.www.ccel.org Moral government theology comes within their editorial remit of 'orthodox christian doctrine', as I believe it would in any overview of mainstream christian doctrines. Afterall, Finney's ministry produced much fruit. http://www.ccel.org/about/mission.html which says their values are: 1. Selectivity—Writings included in the library are considered valuable in some way to build up the church. In addition to Christian classics, there may be secondary literature on the classics and other works valuable for the mission.

2. Orthodoxy—Writings in the library for the most part represent orthodox Christianity as understood by mainstream Protestant, Catholic and Orthodox Christians, with greater emphases on Reformed and Protestant writings.

3. Ecumenicity—The CCEL strives to expose readers to a variety of Christian perspectives.

3. The assertion that God's moral character comes from His choices and not from His metaphysic is a classical Christian and biblical view that distinguishes most christian theology from Islam. The Bible does not teach 'might is right', but that an all powerful God willing restricts His activity only to what is according to His perfect knowledge of what is good and loving, hence He can say of Himself that 'He keeps covenant' etc.

There are 'countless individuals who have had their faith damaged by'....is a non issue. A person's faith is not dependent upon a certain theory of what God does or does not know, but upon the Person of Christ, His death and Resurrection. There are many atheists too who claim to be offended or 'damaged by reformation theology'. That did not mean that therefore reformed theologians were relegated by the Church to the category 'heresy' (except by the orthodox church) even though most Christian traditions would not agree with some of their assertions, in particular a penal theory of the atonement, predestination of individuals to salvation or condemnation and an aristotelian classical worldview with which they framed their understanding of God. There has always been much room for diversity in the Body of Christ and Christian Church tradition over the centuries. One does not have to believe in a human theory of atonement in order to believe Christ died for our sins according to the Scriptures.

4. A discussion of the intellectual, biblical and pastoral consequences of the assertion of penal atonement theory that the Father and the Son had different attitudes towards sinners can be found at www.perichoresis.org

Please justify your assertion that the orthodox doctrines of Finney and his successors are 'heretical' by more that a reference to a source that comes from a minority theological stream of reformed thinking. Of relevance here is the WIKI entry on Limited Atonement Theory where this itself is referred to as 'controversial', yet Leon Morris, a Limited Atonement Theory exponent, is freely referred to in Gome's paper as an authority on christian doctrine. Neither he, nor Pink, would be regarded in this way by mainstream christian theology.

I hope these references are helpful.Issakara 22:25, 2 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Having read the entire discussion L B Brown seems like he has an axe to grind against YWAM. Wikipedia should not be used to issue warnings about heretical groups it should be neutral and impartial.  There should be no references to "this isn't bibical".  If there are controveries state them in a matter of fact way, not in some kind of crusade against ywam... so you had a bad experience big deal... you want to discuss it then get counselling.

Many of those quotes are taken out of context, individual quotes cannot show the overall message of a book or teaching. (Saksjn) (I wasn't logged in) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.112.134.34 (talk) 14:16, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

The critics of YWAM are the honest ones!
I do not understand why the doctrine, practice and history of YWAM would be in dispute. There is tons of documentation to prove that these things are true. Believe me, people like Dr. Alan Gomes and Dr. Cal Beisner are the best when it comes to saying only what they know can be proven with documentation.

On the other hand, what really should be questioned are statements like: "In 1992 alone, the 90 YWAMers and 4,000 refugee staff clothed 53,500 people, immunized 11,000 children per month, trained 109 agricultural students, distributed 44,000 letters monthly, and gave 26 pastors a year's Bible training." I preached a sermon in a small village in Kalimantan and "somewhere around 50 people" came to Christ, but we didn't count. How does one count to 53,500 when working over a long period of time with "90 YWAMers (youth!) and 4,000 refugee staff"? Such claims are impossible to document. Are we supposed to simply put our faith in this organization that has a history of lies, cover-ups and exaggerations? I read in a book about a crusade that I had attended when I was in YWAM and it was touted as a great success with many conversions! Hogwash! It was nothing of the kind. It was a small city in Arizona and George Otis Jr (of Moral Government Theology fame) and John Dawson were our leaders. They had radio broadcasts teaching Moral Government Theology! Sometimes I think that these guys are nothing less than sociopaths with consciences which are seared with a hot iron. They do not know how to feel guilt for their sins and deceptions any more than wild donkeys mating in the forest. (76.175.16.135 22:32, 2 June 2007 (UTC)) Rev. Greg Robertson

Please read the entry I put up. What is in dispute is the right of one group of Christians to call others 'heretics', when the matters under discussion, ie reformed theology and Finney's theology, both fall under the remit of 'orthodox doctrines'. As far as YWAM is concerned, I am sure multiple opinions can be found within in the group as it is quite ecumenical. I have found no official paper anywhere nor heard of any practice that deviates from orthodoxy in this regard. As far as pastoral matters, I am sure every large group has many of them. The important thing is they are addressed by competent leadership.

Please respond to my postings .Issakara 12:38, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

Issakara, we are no longer talking about 'orthodox doctrines'. Further up this page, I have shown YWAM authors Olson and Otis denying that Jesus Christ shed His blood to take away our sins. In light of this, your questions about Gomes fade into irrelevance. Note also that YWAM's 'Moral Government Theology' was invented by Olson and is not the same as the teachings of Finney. --L B Brown 14:40, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

PS. I was absolutely appalled that you do not care about the people who have been damaged by these 'teachings'!

I did not say that, I said it was not relevant to an allegation of heresy Issakara 15:06, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

Olsen never denied the teaching that 'Jesus Christ shed His blood to take away our sins'. It is wrong to suggest he did, any reading of his material will prove otherwise. As for Otis, I know nothing about him and cannot comment.Issakara 15:10, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

'God does not require an exact payment for sin to satisfy retributive justice...' (Gordon Olson, Sharing Your Faith, p. V-4) 'The sacrifice of Christ is not the payment of a debt' (Gordon Olson, Sharing Your Faith, Historical Opinions, p. 2) --L B Brown 15:32, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

These are statements referring to specific penal theory of the atonement, there is no denial here that the atonement took place or that the Christ was not a sacrifice for sin, indeed the biblical language is entirely upheld. He held Christ was fulfilling every element of the OT sacricial system. I have already cited the references. In this Olsen is an exponent of Finney.Issakara 15:58, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

"The atonement of Christ rendered satisfaction to public justice (a demonstration before all that rebellion against authority will be punished), as distinguished from retributive or vindictive justice." In other words, 'Jesus did not die for our sins'. ...the Atonement is not required by the subjective nature or vindictive justice of God before mercy is extended. In other words, 'we don't need to accept Jesus in order to go to heaven'. --L B Brown 16:59, 3 June 2007 (UTC) PS. I don't understand what a 'penal theory of atonement' is. Could you use simple words please :)

A penal theory is one that demands 'retributive or vindictive justice', ie God punishes individual sins demanding an exact payment for the individual offences.

Olsen speaks of an atonement as satisfaction to public justice, namely that 'rebellion against authority will be punished.' Sin here is defined as the collective rebellion of mankind against God's authority throughout the ages ever since the original sin of Adam, which has individually been ratified by each and every human being ever since, whether they lived before or after Moses. (Romans 5:13-14). God punishes this sinfulness and Jesus suffers on account of these sins. His suffering is a substituted for the penality of our collective sin 'the lamb (sacrificial) of God who takes away the sins of the whole world'. John 1: 29

It does not follow 'we don't need to accept Jesus to go to heaven'. This is a non-Christian belief. here Olson is saying the atonement is not required by an atrribute of God's character that requires to demand an 'eye for an eye' before extending mercy. mercy is extended but upon a different premise. Olson was thoroughly Christian, he taught that without repentance and faith in Christ no-one could be saved. What he disagreed with was the Limited Atonement Theory and a penal view of the atonement. The language of the latter is always couched in terms of 'retributive or vindictive justice'. Hope this helps.Issakara 18:03, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

I still cannot understand what you are trying to say, and I have studied mathematical logic. Let's look at Olson's statement: "'The atonement of Christ rendered satisfaction to public justice (a demonstration before all that rebellion against authority will be punished), as distinguished from retributive or vindictive justice.'" I interpret this to mean: "'The atonement of Christ was merely a demonstration that God does not like sin. My individual sins (all sins I have committed and ever will commit) were not imputed to Christ when He died on the cross. Christ did not die in order to satisfy God's wrath against all the sins I have committed and ever will commit.'" This is not biblical. Now consider his statement: "'Holiness and sin are free voluntary acts of will or states of mind, and, although strongly influenced, are not caused by any internal force of nature, tendency, or instinct, nor by persuasion from external sources.'" I interpret this as: 'Man does not have an inherent sinful nature.' which is also clearly unbiblical. I believe that most people would interpret these two statements in exactly the same way. --L B Brown 19:07, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

1. All that rebellion against authority will be punished: is a clear statement that sin will be punished. What Olsen is saying is that the death of Christ satisfied public justice. The punishment for sin was against the corporate activities of man since the time of Adam. This is certainly not a mere demonstration that 'God did not like sin'. Olsen has an entire page in the manual about the way the Christ fulfilled the requirements of the OT sacrificial system and held that His death could not be understood without apprehending the meaning of the sacrifices instituted by Divine Revelation. Olsen held that the Christ died for the sins of the world., this is actually stated in the quote you used, 'Christ rendered satisfaction to public justice'. If your individual sins are included in the 'sins of the world', then it is not in dispute that Olsen would have said that His sacrifice was for you also..

2. Holiness and sin are free voluntary acts of will or states of mind:- I think what is being referred to is 'venial sin' as opposed to 'original' or 'mortal' sin. Venial sin is generally understood to be deliberate conscious acts of disobedience against God. No causative agent which could render mankind with an excuse before God is inferred here. This is Gordon's point. Original sin refers to all corporate consequences of Adam's sin, which was unlike ours in that he acted out of innocence. Romans 5:14. We are not culpable for these conditions within which we find ourselves. Olsen makes this clear also. He calls it the depraved sinful nature. What he asserts is that not only does man find himself in this depraved state, but he voluntarily and deliberately contributes to the maintenance and development of this depravity all of the time. Romans1:18 "men who keep (actively) the truth imprisoned in their wickedness". Mortal sin is unforgivable. I have not found any reference to this in his manual. His manual does not claim to be an entire or even definitive description of all Christian thinking.

There are various theories of sin, original sin, atonement and the like in Christian tradition. Finney's thinking is only one viewpoint upon many. Such diversity is characteristic of the Church and one theory should not be taught to the exclusion of others. I cannot see anything in Olsen or Finney which would depart from orthodoxy. There are no grounds to hold that anyone with such views are 'heretics'.

Each systematic view of revelation is likely to create its own language as it generates it own frame of reference and analysis. This is unavoidable. It is a fruit of fallenness! Confusion arises when concepts inherent in one system are used to interpret the categories of another, especially when similar language is used described different things.

It is my view that all views, reformation theologies, MGT or whatever, all fall short of Biblical teaching and should not be used as a definitive framework within which to understand Scripture. With respect to ideas of 'sin', Scripture teaches that iniquity is a 'mystery'...mysteries are not subject to systematic formulations.

This discussion appears to about the atonement and sin rather than YWAM.

It is my understanding is that YWAM does not pronounce on particular theories of the atonement or other doctrines. As a Christian organisation of global scope, this is commendable. It should only hold on to what is essential to the Christian Faith and looking at its official material that is what I find to be the case.

P.S. I was surprised to find one of the individuals you referred to was upset that certain books were 'available within the organisation' ! Does this Christian leader expect Christian organisations to censor what people read? I have never heard of YWAM leaders censoring what people might wish to read or discuss amongst themselves. Indeed, as an international organisation specialising in short term work and launching new projects in needy parts of the world all the time such censureship would be impossible.Issakara 23:07, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

Issakara, I find your explanations to be garbled, long-winded, unclear and extremely unconvincing:) I propose to remove my personal interpretations of Gomes' document from the 'unorthodox doctrines' section. I will then add the quotes from Gomes, Olson, Otis, etc. This way, people can make up their own minds... --L B Brown 04:34, 4 June 2007 (UTC)

In brief, 1.You said Olsen did not teach Jesus died for the sins of the world, this is incorrect. I have earlier referred to original sources on this. 2 You said he did not teach the depravity of mankind, when he did. 3. This discussion is about Olsen and MGT, not about YWAM. What is unclear or garbled?Issakara 10:11, 4 June 2007 (UTC)

Unorthodox Doctrines
About the section "Unorthodox Doctrines": this is clearly not the doctrine that is taught in YWAM. In the YWAM statement of faith, they say "all people have sinned and come short of God's glory" which contradicts the second point of this section (that Mankind is not inherently sinful). Martious 19:07, 4 June 2007 (UTC)

Well, YWAM says that it teaches biblical doctrines, but these theologians are saying that YWAM has also taught unbiblical doctrines. If I am an employer and someone comes to me to ask for a job, I will ask for the phone numbers of their referees. I won't just accept what they say about themselves; I want to know what other people say about them. It is the same situation here. Are you able to give a satisfactory explanation for these quotes from YWAM teachers and authors: George Otis Jr., in The God They Never Knew: H. Roy Elseth in his book Did God Know?: Gordon Olson, in Sharing Your Faith: --L B Brown 02:16, 5 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 'if we accept the premise that Jesus literally purchased our salvation with His blood, it portrays God as vindictive and bloodthirsty (p. 109)'
 * 'The assertion that Jesus paid for our sins has caused immeasurable damage to the Body of Christ (p. 93)'
 * 'sin is not inherited—it comes by choice, it is created (p. 59)' (denying the inherent sinful nature of man)
 * 'God is good because He chooses to be good....He(God) only is able to do right who is able at the same time to do wrong. (p. 26)' (denying the immutable holiness of God)
 * 'God does not require an exact payment for sin to satisfy retributive justice...“God is love” and has completely subdued all thought of retaliation toward rebellious sinners. (p. V-4)' (denying that Christ was sacrificed to satisfy God's wrath against sin)
 * 'The sacrifice of Christ is not the payment of a debt' (Historical Opinions, p. 2)
 * 'Holiness and sin are free voluntary acts of will or states of mind, and, although strongly influenced, are not caused by any internal force of nature, tendency, or instinct, nor by persuasion from external sources.' (another denial of the inherent sinful nature of man)

The 'unorthodox doctrines' section contains paraphrases that are mine and not direct quotes from Gomes. I have removed two of the three claims while they are under dispute. Evangelical theologian Calvin Beisner states: ' Since the 1960s, a new heretical theology has been infiltrating evangelical circles. Not officially embraced by any well-known denomination or parachurch organization, the system has nevertheless made serious inroads into at least one large and well-known missions organization... 'The system's major proponents dub it moral government theology. But today's moral government theology is a far cry from what went by that name two centuries ago.... Contemporary moral government theology is principally the brainchild of the late Gordon C. Olson.... Moral government theology (hereafter MGT) first began to spread rapidly when Olson and Conn became regular speakers for Youth With A Mission (YWAM), which has since become one of the larger youth missionary organizations in the world. Contrary to YWAM's repeated denials that MGT was an important part of its teaching, it was in YWAM training that tens of thousands of students from the late 1970s through the 1980s, and some even into the 1990s, learned MGT (although today some YWAM leaders speak against MGT).'

Because Olson's version of MGT is linked heavily to YWAM, is different to historical MGT, and is considered heretical by some evangelical theologians (Gomes and Beisner), I oppose the merger of Olson's MGT with the historical MGT article. --L B Brown 05:38, 5 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I don't say there are no wrong doctrines teached by some people in YWAM, I say even though there are some, it's not in the general doctrine (guide-line) of YWAM in general. So don't put it as it was a generality but this is a one time, some teacher thing. And except these one or two exceptions all the other teachers teach the doctrine stated by YWAM. And it is what is important: WHAT IS TEACHED THE MOST FREQUENTLY not the exception, although you can mention it. Martious 15:46, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

Controversy Section Disproportunate
I have edited the controversy section (09:58, 5 September 2007 195.162.201.57 - forgot to log in) because it is too large in comparison to the size of the article. There are several points to my reasoning:
 * The dispute on MGT is 17 years old and the points made refer to that period.
 * The dispute on Authoritarianism refers to very specific cases in the past. The proper place for resolving such disputes in not in an Encyclopedia! Detailing just two case histories should not persuade the reader. There are plenty of websites out there with people discussing their stories. The reader should be directed to sources.
 * The section is too long: 722 words out of 2768. Compare this to Jehovah's witness Article's controversy section: 580 of 12281 words. (There is a Controversies regarding Jehovah's Witnesses article with more).
 * The Moral Government Theology article has no link to YWAM but does to Methodism yet Methodism has no criticism section. This draws me to the conclusion that the controversy section admits extreme bias as it stands at the moment.
 * There is currently no rebuttal part to the controversy section.

Now, I am a YWAMer and so I must withdraw from this discussion soon as I am clearly biased. However, the WP aims for a NPV and this section is clearly in breach of this due to its disproportionate size and lack of balance.

The WP article on YWAM is not the place to carry on disputes against YWAM that currently continue in certain places on the internet. The Article already has links to those critical sites.

The purpose of the article is to be an Encyclopedia entry. Lets get back to that.
 * --Kev-the-Hasty 10:23, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

Kev, the Rick Ross site has updates of criticism and warning as recent as this year. I'm taking an interest in this article as a former member of another organization that has been accused of authoritarianism, fostered dependency, elitist attitude toward attitude other churches, treating council as commandment, unwillingness to listen to criticism, treating dating as a sin, discouragement of education, and discouragement of outside counseling. Quite a laundry list there, I know. An appropriate encyclopedia article will incorporate criticism from authorities in related fields. The typical tactic by organizations which grew out of the Jesus Movement and employed a sheperding strategy for growth and development is to frame profound instances of error as isolated and uncommon. In refutation, those who know to look for these greivous aberrations find their presence in these organizations to be as predictable as clockwork. I will be adding generously to this section and reverting without regard to "proportion"-- the proportion of affirming and critical RS, extant and verifiable, will be our guide now. I encourage you to research and include affirming sources with can be included under current wikipedia guidelines. ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:24, 11 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Research will show (Read Alan Gomes book or look up Christian Research Journal for articles) that the Methodist MGT is different from the MGT that is being discussed here. YWAM MGT includes teaching such as denial of original sin, God's limited knowledge and the denial of Christ's death as a propitiation for our sins (all of which the Methodist's MGT still affirms).  It's all these points combined that makes up the NEW MGT.
 * — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.74.201.149 (talk) 20:31, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

editing shooting story
The facts about grenades needs a citation asap, or it will be removed. The lack of citation for "former YWAM missionary" is the reason that statement is deleted. 66.8.162.9 (talk) 03:39, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

New Information
I am a leader within YWAM and I have added additional sections regarding Structure, Doctrines and Practices, Foundational Values and Reception among the Evangelical community. I have met the fundamental criteria set forth by this portal in that my entries contain no original research, all informational is verifiable, and I have presented a neutral point of view. I welcome any comments or critiques on my additions. Davidandrewclark (talk) 19:49, 18 December 2007 (UTC)


 * A lot of the new additions violate Wikipedia policy WP:SELFPUB, among others. I'm removing to put on talk page so these can be corrected.  With the new endorsements section, that's fine, a parachurch can have an endorsements section, but there are a number of problems with it.  Mainly, a self published source may not make claims about 3rd parties.  Also, the notability of a source can easily be established with a wikilink.  Bolding is not necessary, and titles are restricted.  Wikipedia is no respecter of men. =)  72.19.140.173 (talk) 06:45, 19 December 2007 (UTC)


 * The self publication policy refers particularly to individuals who are citing their own works as source materials. This does not preclude the citation of self-descriptive materials published by a subject (in this case YWAM), so long as the NPV is maintained.63.225.147.230 (talk) 18:53, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

Endorsements
YWAM is endorsed by several Evangelical leaders.
 * David Aikman (author and former TIME Magazine editor)
 * Bill Bright (deceased, Founder of Campus Crusade for Christ International)
 * George K. Brushaber (President, Bethel University)
 * Luis Bush (Former Director, AD 2000 and Beyond)
 * Tony Campolo (Professor of Sociology, Eastern College)
 * David Cummings (Wycliffe, former president)
 * Jim Engel (Center for Organizational Excellence)
 * Roger T Forster (Founder and Leader, Ichthus Christian Fellowship)
 * Billy Graham
 * Franklin Graham (President, Samaritan's Purse)
 * Roger S. Greenway (Professor of World Missiology, Calvin Theological Seminary)
 * Jack W. Hayford (Pastor/President, The Church On The Way, The King's Seminary)
 * Dick Hugoniot (President, Wycliffe Bible Translators International)
 * Bill Hybels (Senior Pastor, Willow Creek Community Church)
 * Bill McCartney (Founder & President, Promise Keepers)
 * Lloyd Ogilvie (First Presbyterian Church, Hollywood, California)
 * Jerry Rankin (President, International Mission Board, Southern Baptist Convention)
 * Jon C. Shuler (General Secretary, New Anglican Missionary Society)
 * Tom White (Director, The Voice of the Martyrs)
 * Dallas Willard (author and Professor of Philosophy, University of Southern California).

This corrects the problems of wikification and rhetoric but WP:SELFPUB is still not satisfied. References from reliable third parties must be given. 72.19.140.173 (talk) 06:45, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Here's a quick reference. These Global Pastors network partners are working with YWAM. Does that satisfy the self-pub rule? http://www.gpn.tv/GPNtv.jhtmlKeiko234 (talk) 06:48, 20 December 2007 (UTC) Here's another one. Table 71 http://www.table71.org/T71-Resources.asp
 * A link isn't an explicit endorsement, although I can imagine Global Pastors Network endorsing YWAM, especially based on that. GPN, unlike other sources listed, is actually notable.  I should know, I wrote their article and got the DYK nom.  Is Table 71 in any way notable?  And how many of these (potential) sources are members of GPN?  If it's really GPN that endorses YWAM, then the rest is just listcruft.  The perception previously expressed from neutral and contrary positions is that GPN will gladly endorse anyone buying their materials.  But I will be glad to concede in namespace that GPN endorses YWAM and not one bad word about the connection.  It does support the notion that theological critics of YWAM are correct in their assessment of "dominionism".  But I would never point that out in namespace.  That would be original research. ClaudeReigns (talk) 12:05, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

I think it would be very beneficial if each one of these organizations got researched for their connection and endorsement of YWAM. ClaudeReigns are you up for the challenge? Can you prove any of these have not endorsed YWAM? Instead of adding to the knowledge you are taking it away. If you want to increase knowledge, then why is this happening? Keiko234 (talk) 17:40, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

It's official WP policy as I've shown that all information must be well sourced. The responsibility of proving the worth, reliability, and verifiability of all content lies with the editors including such information. In short, I don't have to prove they have endorsed YWAM, and can delete the endorsements if they are not verified through a third-party, which does include the endorsers themselves. The heart of the matter: I don't "know" what's being put forth unless it's properly sourced. It doesn't count as "knowledge" unless you source it properly. Also, I didn't 'disappear' the content, I just threw it on the talk page assuming that someone would get around to sourcing it. Good luck with that. Now that you're familiar with WP:SELFPUB you might be finding some other content here joining it. ClaudeReigns (talk) 10:59, 22 December 2007 (UTC)

Akha Heritage Foundation
A non-profit human rights foundation dedicated to the protection of ethnic Ahkas currently maintains that YWAM is involved in financial exploitation of young Akha girls in Thailand and that the Salem, Oregon branch of the organization has attempted to conceal their involvement with the mission work there.

Such allegations may be considered in the light of YWAM's publicly available Statement of Faith and since 2002 their clearly defined grievance and reconciliation procedure. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidandrewclark (talk • contribs) 16:41, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

Additional input is needed on this issue (beyond ClaudeReigns). I assert that these allegations from the AHF have no material bearing on an encyclopedic description of YWAM. These issues involve 2 operating locations out of 1,100 around the world. This issue has extremely little bearing on the character of the organization as a whole. The allegations of the AHF are at present unproven and unsubstatiated. If these issues are ever resolved--then perhaps--maybe--they may be worth mentioning. Above all else--several WP policies are violated: 1) WP is not a discussion forum WP:FORUM. 2) WP is not a site for posting allegations WP:NOT#BATTLEGROUND and 3) The AHF is an advocacy cause WP:SOAPS.  Davidandrewclark (talk) 16:58, 21 December 2007 (UTC)


 * WP:NOT clearly says "Of course, an article can report objectively about such things, as long as an attempt is made to approach a neutral point of view." I am not a member of AHF and am not using wikipedia to advocate a group I'm personally involved with.  User:Davidandrewclark however seems to be a single purpose account to defend YWAM content.
 * WP:BATTLE clearly falls under a community (not content) guidleline. Is there a particular piece of my community interaction you find objectionable enough to censor this content over?
 * Since most of the information about the Akha article itself derives from AHF sources, it would seem that this source is the most authoritative about the history and condition of the Akha people. The source itself documents conditions at Eden House with photographs.  It would seem to be reliable and verifiable.  Am I missing something?  And why is it that the rebuttal from YWAMers is now removed?  Granted that it seems a little out of place and weak now that the controversies presented are more than just theological... but still... what is the reasoning behind removing that content as well?  You never explained that.  ClaudeReigns (talk) 09:36, 22 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Just added a third-party source to support the notability of this dispute. ClaudeReigns (talk) 09:55, 22 December 2007 (UTC)


 * The specific allegations being made are here: http://www.akha.org/upload/flyers/akhaalert10ywam.pdf

But I chose not to use words like "sick" and "genocide" because that wouldn't be NPoV. I simply used the most calm euphemisms as they appeared on the AHF website and ATTRIBUTED them to AHF, thus maintaining NPoV. ClaudeReigns (talk) 10:29, 22 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Following up on David Clark, I discovered that he's seriously violating WP:COI by editing his organization's article.  I'll reintroduce the content and will continue to revert all edits under this SPA. ClaudeReigns (talk) 10:36, 22 December 2007 (UTC)


 * WP:COI states,"Who has written the material should be irrelevant so long as these policies are closely adhered to. The imputation of conflict of interest is not by itself a good reason to remove sound material from articles. However, an apparent conflict of interest is a good reason for close review by the community to identify any subtle bias." WP issues cautions with regard to COI, and these I have strived to heed.Davidandrewclark (talk) 19:10, 23 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Re the claim that I am "single purpose account with the intent to defend YWAM"-- I don't think that's a fair assessment. I have acted in good faith,according to WP policies. And I have made no effort to conceal my identity. My concern for the YWAM article at present is that it gives undo weight WP:UNDUE to minority perspectives toward YWAM. The organization is highly regarded among Evangelical leaders,which the above "Endorsement" section demonstrates. I can accept that the controversies around the organization should be given mention--but in proportion.63.225.147.230 (talk) 19:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

Can definitely note your concerns about WP:UNDUE. They mirror some of my own from the other perspective. Comments on critical sources have been limited to a single sentence to outline the concerns of the individual source except where a considerable effort is given in the source to qualify an overall judgment (as in the Ross evaluation) or multiple concerns are raised within a single source. Whereas, it seems extensive prose lifted directly from the organizations website comprises the rest of the article. Since it seems that these critical sources come from extensive journalistic sources from political and religious perpectives, the most heavily cited "cult expert" from all journalistic sources, an advocacy group, all of which are third parties, and upcoming sources from so many theological perspectives (Evangelicals and other Protestant perspectives, many of whom are very concerned about the absence of sola fide doctrine, for example.) They are extensive enough I've yet to condense it all, so it remains to be seen whose opinion is indeed the minority at all. Sofar, all we have is the word of the organization, which I continue to doubt because of a pervasive lack of third-party sourcing. Making an effort to properly source and add third-party content to the affirmative will help with the balance of the article. If you are here in good faith, then welcome. I hope we will learn a lot from each other. There was one name that I deleted recently that sounded familiar, a Mr. Nizza. If he, for example is notable enough to have his own article, we could return his name to the list of notable people. ClaudeReigns (talk) 21:43, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

List of endorsements part II
For now, this list is to keep track of third-party articles about YWAM. Part of the purpose will be to list where the above speakers are working side by side with YWAM.


 * YWAM and Mercy Ships: (It also mentions Don Stephens, a notable person within YWAM...also found in "Is that Really you God by Loren Cunningham http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2007/december/24.50.html
 * YWAM Rwanda and filmmaking: http://www.christianitytoday.com/movies/news/blog-070604.html


 * Frank Naea and Jim Stier, YWAM's notable people http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/1999/march1/9t323b.html


 * Partnerships that include YWAM http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2006/march/30.56.html


 * Quote about Keith Green and YWAM's interaction. Another quote about sending 500,000 people out each year http://www.assistnews.net/Stories/2007/s07080185.htm [the article actually says 50,000, not 500,000- C.R.]


 * A parents perspective about YWAM Denver shooting http://www.assistnews.net/STORIES/2007/s07120065.htm


 * Ministry to callgirls in Amsterdam http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2000/october2/10.70.html


 * More about Don Stephens http://www.assistnews.net/STORIES/2007/s07120109.htm


 * Cooperation with Church of God mentioned http://www.faithnews.cc/articles.cfm?sid=8010


 * Tyler paper report on YWAM http://www.tylerpaper.com/article/20071211/NEWS08/712110328


 * Interview with Lynn Green http://www.christianpost.com/article/20050425/13425_Interview_with_the_Executive_Chairman_of_YWAM,_Lynn_Green.htm


 * Help for Katrina victims http://www.christianpost.com/article/20050902/13704_YWAM_Houses,_Prepares_Aid_for_Hurricane_Katrina_Victims.htm


 * Help for Pakistan http://www.christianpost.com/article/20070729/28654_Relief_Agencies_Continue_to_Respond_to_Silent_Cries_of_Pakistan_Flood_Victims.htm

I am not an employee of Youth with a Mission, I am a volunteer. These are easily found articles. Many of the names mentioned above are partners with YWAM, but to find sources except for witnesses is going to be hard. Since we have 16,000 full time staff, there will be some who are dissatisfied and or hurt. They are out there and on behalf of all staff, we ask their forgiveness and want to improve so no one experiences that kind of pain. With 500,000 students around the world, there's a wide variety of experiences, media reports tend to favor the few negative ones rather than the majority of satisfied ones. Bsheepwiki (talk) 03:28, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

Good job with sources. I'm not sure that being a volunteer authorizes you to speak "on behalf of all staff", and this probably isn't a good forum for identificational repentance in action. The POV of most ex-comms and walkaways, despite the picture you paint, does not typify toward glaring media attention. I find it senseless to hypothesize about the representativity of media reports. Journalism is our tool to recall what has happened in the modern age and all people are potentially journalists. In the end you will find that much has been said in favor of YWAM and that if you care enough to include it, the article will represent those who have positive experiences with the organization, while still providing enough caveat and linkage so that no one who's visited here can say "Why didn't I know that about YWAM?" Once again, I find it encouraging that you are taking part and providing appropriate sources for claims within the article. I'll be sure to take a look at Christian Post. Welcome. ClaudeReigns (talk) 06:59, 24 December 2007 (UTC)


 * Followup... the source says fifty thousand, not five hundred thousand. ClaudeReigns (talk) 06:53, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The ASSIST News source conflicts with the numbers Fox News applies to yearly short term missionaries. The difference between 20,000 and 50,000 is significant enough to call into question the reliability of Aid to Special Saints in Strategic Times. Note that this source is not ASSIST based out of Vermont. ClaudeReigns (talk) 07:04, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Cult?
Just a question, would a cult be allowed to minister in churches of every major denomination on a regular basis?The base my family works at in Orlando is located in a church and we minister 1-3 times a week to churches of every major denomination in the area. Would a cult be allowed this much influence in the modern American and non-American church? Would churches finanicially support a cult like they do YWAM? I think not. Saksjn (talk) 14:27, 24 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The talk page is for discussion of improvements to the article. I take it you disagree with the sources. Since Fox News had to ask if YWAM is a cult, and brought in the most journalistically recognized "cult expert" to make an assessment, let's assume there are some people who consider it to be so... however they define the term. This in itself is notable. It's true this article needs work--work finding sources verifying the claims made by the primary source which comprises most of the article.


 * I'm sorry to see that a vandal has come by and deleted numerous verifiable sources. This vandalism has been restored. I was hoping that improper use of primary sources would be backed up by third-party sources by now. Unfortunately, those sources not conforming to policy WP:SELFPUB will have to be supported or deleted in the next three days. ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:04, 30 January 2008 (UTC)

Rant?
the Controversy section should be a recognition that some consider YWAM controversial, not a rant against the organization. Saksjn (talk) 18:11, 31 January 2008 (UTC)


 * It's definitely possible to represent notable controversies about an organization. Do you believe that the namespace language which describes these sources is indicative of a rant? I think I've been extremely careful to attribute criticisms to their sources, and demonstrate their notability through wikilinking. Or by characterizing the controversy section as a "rant", do you hope to vanish the criticism as has been done on this page in the past? I know your family works at a base in Orlando, perhaps you might be a little close to this topic. I am, however, trying to AGF. Without you being more specific, I'm assuming that since you are a young person close to the organization you therefore are simply feeling overwhelmed by the scope of critical information to which you have never been exposed, causing a kind of cognitive dissonance.
 * Don't worry, I don't think a wikipedia editor can be blocked 'for health reasons'. The Christian News (Lutheran News, Inc.) calls your organization "anti-intellectual", as my past forty days here tend to bear out: I have patiently waited for a YWAMer to actually support their content (pasted from their websites) with third-party sources; but now I am hoping you can bring more to the talk page than rhetoric and more to the article than primary sources. Do us the honor of being specific. It will no doubt increase your esteem as an editor. Thank you and welcome. ClaudeReigns (talk) 22:29, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I'll try to do a better job on sourcing info. I'm super busy right now so its difficult to find time. Once I have time I'll look for articles suppporting YWAM and disagreeing with some of the controversy. Thanks for the note and I'll do my best to help out. Saksjn (talk) 14:48, 26 February 2008 (UTC)

Doesn't the manuel of style discourage controversy sections becasue they are not encyclopedic? Saksjn (talk) 14:48, 26 February 2008 (UTC)


 * No, WP:MOS doesn't mention controversy or criticism. There is an essay discourages them as implying a POV and recommends they be merged as much as possible. Thus the merge. This essay (not policy or guideline) on criticism is WP:Criticism. Though editors are not obliged to follow it, I note it. ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:21, 26 February 2008 (UTC)

About the whole thing being overwhelming, not really. I've known about many of the controversies most of my life. I actually went through one of the more controversial happenings in YWAM which isn't even mentioned here. Saksjn (talk) 19:15, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

UN Partnership

 * In the 1980's, YWAM's refugee ministry in Thailand began partnering with the UN to provide effective relief for countless stranded refugees along Thailand's porous border. In 1992 alone, the 90 YWAMers and 4,000 refugee staff clothed 53,500 people, immunized 11,000 children per month, trained 109 agricultural students, distributed 44,000 letters monthly, and gave 26 pastors a year's Bible training.

The primary assertion that YWAM and UN 'partnered' in the 80's at Thai refugee camps is not established in any third party source I can find, and none of the statistics, either. Will remove to talk page on Friday if not supported with a third party. ClaudeReigns (talk) 04:27, 1 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Moved to talk page to await support. ClaudeReigns (talk) 02:42, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Rios Montt part one
Please provide verification that Clifford Krause actually states that Rios Montt "eradicated many human rights abuses" and that this is in fact reliable. ClaudeReigns (talk) 05:06, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Clarified from source. ClaudeReigns (talk) 02:45, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Sorry to bring up what seems like a fun little fact. But what does the Rios Montt paragraph have to do with Youth With A Mission? It refers solely to an individual who happens to be the organizations founder. I suggest this little trivia nugget be deleted for lack of relevance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Delhiwallah (talk • contribs) 12:46, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * There's an extended conversation below. It has its own section. ClaudeReigns (talk) 12:51, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Merging Criticism
Affirming sources are definitely welcome! It's assumed however that the merging of critical sources with the main body of the article helps to create a more neutral point of view, which may help with the appearance of a "rant." Both fringe critical and primary sources note a connection to the Olympic Games, so I will be working at sourcing these outreaches, and exploring new leads about Gordon Watson (anti-abortionist), while extending the invitation to merge the critical sources with the main article body. ClaudeReigns (talk) 06:51, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

Strike-through text == No time to edit ==

Since there's plenty of references to old controversies, here's links to help balance the article some more.

what's happening:
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2007/december/24.50.html already cited, remember Mercy Ships is operationally distinct from YWAM, though it was not always ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:00, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/movies/news/blog-070604.html already cited in section about TFI ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:01, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/cl/9c4/9c4038.html Added cite in history, thanks ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:07, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2006/march/30.56.html already cited, but added to history ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:23, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/tc/8r3/8r3037.html added to history ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:23, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/1996/july15/6t8070.html?start=2 I've got an entire content fork (Youth With A Mission's Olympic Outreaches) ready to add which includes this ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:23, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2008/february/28.60.html?start=2 (points to legitimate mission groups) This is mostly about TMI, not sure what this adds except "Paul Fidilis is international communications director for YWAM" ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:30, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/2000/october2/10.70.html already sourced in Outreach section ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:32, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/tcw/1999/marapr/9w2030.html?start=2 (positive experience) not particularly historical in significance, but added to intro to support wide anecdotes of positive experiences ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:40, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/1997/july14/7t8034.html?start=2 (more positive experience) also added to intro and also going to cite at King's Kids International ClaudeReigns (talk) 08:40, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

I still don't have the time to integrate this into the article. But separating the controversity and merging it into the whole article doesn't seem to follow the pattern in other wiki posts. So i disagree with it.

Keiko234 (talk) 09:07, 16 February 2008 (UTC)


 * This is clearly explained in NPOV. Good job on sources. I can be sure to read them, summarize them, and cite them when this current cleanup is complete. ClaudeReigns (talk) 07:14, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

New set of sources

 * http://www.alertnet.org/thenews/fromthefield/106864252976.htm (2005 help in Uganda) --added
 * http://www.christianpost.com/article/20070729/28654_Relief_Agencies_Continue_to_Respond_to_Silent_Cries_of_Pakistan_Flood_Victims.htm --Already described at "Disaster Relief"
 * http://www.jamaicaobserver.com/westernnews/html/20070912T220000-0500_127291_OBS_MISSIONARY_SERVICE_ANYONE_.asp (about how *many countries YWAM is involved in) -- Yes, that respected authority on global intelligence, the Jamaica Observer
 * http://www.signonsandiego.com/news/northcounty/20061214-9999-lz1mi14lauren.html (help build homes for homeless) --added thanks
 * http://www.alertnet.org/thenews/fromthefield/218275/117931431622.htm (help those in Uganda) --expanded
 * http://www.md-times.com/?module=displaystory&story_id=7008&format=html (16000 workers...tsunami story) --between this and the New Orleans story we're moving slowly towards statements like "YWAM has also the been the victim of many natural disasters...."
 * http://www.thekansan.com/stories/091903/rel_-1965871906.shtml (stats from 2003) --The article already has more current and notable estimates, but this might be helpful in the future for a growth graphic source
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/1999/august9/9t9068.html (dancing, AIDS, arts) --Learned something new. Important to contrast the experience of disaffiliates.
 * http://www.christianitytoday.com/ct/1996/july15/6t8070.html (olympics outreach) --definitely have this included in the new article
 * http://www.kltv.com/Global/story.asp?S=1801099 (free health care) --cited, will follow up with a similar source
 * http://www.md-times.com/?module=displaystory&story_id=7008&format=html (personal story about tsunami) --added
 * http://www.kplctv.com/Global/story.asp?S=5158140&nav=0nqx (rebuilding home) --added
 * http://worldnetdaily.com/news/article.asp?ARTICLE_ID=47208 (mercy ships) --"operationally distinct" and already cited from another syndication
 * http://www.crosswalk.com/1432127/ (call to prayer with another organization) --added
 * http://www.virginislandsdailynews.com/index.pl/article_features?id=17595197 (working with other christian groups) --
 * http://www.accessmylibrary.com/coms2/summary_0286-29423378_ITM (built 2000 homes for needy) --supported briefly but not entirely
 * http://www.stuff.co.nz/stuff/4172900a6563.html (health care in afghanistan) ==added to 'dangerous work'
 * http://www.christiantoday.com/article/evangelical.alliance.back.initiative.to.train.one.million.mission.leaders./4063.htm (united with evangelical organization) --was already sourced
 * http://www.semissourian.com/story.html$rec=145466 (30,000 short term missionaries --again, questioning the fact-checking reliability of a small local paper to make size assessments of a global organization
 * http://www.ghanaweb.com/GhanaHomePage/audio/article.php?ID=1497) Ghana --supported uncited, demonstrated performing arts in training phase
 * http://www.caymannetnews.com/cgi-script/csArticles/articles/000023/002363.htm (positive experience) --also supported uncited
 * http://www.pittsburghlive.com/x/valleyindependent/jubilation/s_305449.html (working with other christian agencies) --added
 * http://www.call2all.org/ (partnering with 200 other ministries) --already cited in memberships

24.165.44.163 (talk) 09:12, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

Rios Montt
Ever consider that someone like Loren Cunnigham has met people of all kinds and may not know their heart? All the associations you've brought up about Guatemala isn't linked that closely with YWAM but to brief meetings and a misjudgment of Rios Montt's character? Haven't you've given it more importance that is warranted here? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.165.44.163 (talk) 09:28, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
 * It's the notice of journalists, namely Frederick Clarkson and Sara Diamond, that have given it weight. The Statement of Faith and the work of Mercy Ministries have more weight here. Soon Youth With A Mission's Olympic outreaches will have more weight than all of these, simply because this is what YWAM is noted for in reliable third-party publications. A bad bet on a dictator is sure to attract attention. History tends to note where our leaders spend their moral capital. There are other examples of embarrassing choices within the organization which have been reliably reported and do not yet appear here. I however, shall forebear while awaiting more reports of positive experiences and positive impact. The Olympic outreach section will be augmented, or premiere in an article by itself, within a week. What is preferred? ClaudeReigns (talk) 13:24, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

Under Ríos Montt, an Evangelical Christian, death-squad killing around Guatemala City was virtually ended, but the Army herded thousands of Indians into reeducation camps and subjected to psychological warfare while tens of thousands of Indians were slaughtered. Spain currently seeks Ríos Montt's extradition on war crimes charges stemming from the Mayan genocide during his presidency.

This content is very out of place here. How does this content prove YWAM is connected to genocide? It might be included you also show that the bulk of the money YWAM spends is to provide for widows, children, building homes, fighting to free slaves. It's not neutral otherwise. There are numerous journalist articles pointing to how we spend this money on the causes of injustice, far different from the light portrayed in Keiko234 (talk) 22:47, 23 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Go back and take a look at the edit and the source Now tell me--how this horrid misattribution by User:Davidandrewclark should have been answered? Perhaps I should have deleted it altogether. The line of apologetics initiated there (that Rios Montt was pretty much a good guy) was silly to pursue, worse still to present a scholarly source as supporting it. Which it doesn't. Rios Montt, according to even DAC's source, killed 70,000 Mayans and put just about as many in concentration camps to make them the kind of Christians he wanted them to be. Talk about Discipleship Training.


 * Yours is a much better tack and deserves an answer. Cunningham didn't come to the table as a husband or a pastor. The men at the table were there as representatives of sizably wealthy religious interests there to help effect a declared political revolution. This isn't original research. This is what Sara Diamond's book Spiritual Warfare is about. Youth With A Mission is mentioned intentionally, and this is not the only mention of YWAM within its pages. There's more concerning galoshes in that book which I anticipate I'll add before all is said and done.


 * Speaking of CONTENT, I don't believe anyone's yet mentioned a preference for the material I'm about to add. Should an exhaustive summary of Olympic outreaches stay on the main page or fork to its own article? Gah, if no one is going to be bold one way or the other, I guess I'll just fork it. ClaudeReigns (talk) 06:34, 24 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I think that the problem with the Youth_With_A_Mission section is that it simply doesn't fit on the Youth With A Mission article page. Perhaps it should be moved to the Loren Cunningham page?


 * I'll be glad to do that if no one else has the time. Delhiwallah (talk) 09:04, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

The amount of Olympic outreaches could warrent there own article, but it's not like they are a seperate part of the organization. Branches like KKI, MA, and the various schools can warrant there own articles, but I don't think a series of outreaches would. (I probably misspelled at least one of those words) Saksjn (talk) 14:53, 26 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I'd say just leave the Olympic stuff where it is, lest, on it's own, it becomes a seldom visited article stub. Delhiwallah (talk) 08:58, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

expert needed response
Would one of our leaders be considered an expert. I know some people that have been in YWAM for a long time and could contribute significantly to the history section. Saksjn (talk) 14:53, 26 February 2008 (UTC)

What about the notability of those involved in the organization? There's way more authors than the two journalists that are quoted, and from what I understand, none of the people who are experts can contribute because they are not third party sources. Would books from more than 10 YWAMers be useful? Within YWAM there's way more authors than that. Would the census within the organization be used? This article allows more freedom for critics than for any long time YWAMer. Is there any journalist willing to look into it, interview the people quoted? Since the International YWAMer magazine is not viewed a "legitimate source" how can additional positive stories be added? By not viewing smaller papers as a useful source, it feels like an impossible task. Even larger sources are excluded. LA Times published the best one, yet it is behind the "for fee curtain now"...as are many other sources." Keiko234 (talk) 06:06, 2 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Books from 10 YWAMers could be useful where they talk about YWAM itself, as well as the census, even the international YWAMer magazine--but all this must conform to WP:SELFPUB. Even the LA Times story is probably less than the cost of a latte. ClaudeReigns (talk) 13:09, 2 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Could an interview with a notable long time YWAMer be used as a source for the history section. I could try to set up an interview with Steve Sizemore, Dean Sherman, Micheal Berg, or several others. The chance of interviewing Loren Cunningham is low, I've only met him twice and he rarely comes to Orlando, but its not impossible. Saksjn (talk) 14:24, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

Cultic allegations and disaffiliations 1983-1994 I suggest merging this section with the other criticisms toward the end of the article. It seems to make the most sense to have criticisms in the same section especially since David Clark's rebuttal follows. Let me know your thoughts please. -R —Preceding unsigned comment added by Robiwan74 (talk • Robiwan74 (talk) 01:30, 13 March 2008 (UTC)Robiwan74, 12 March, 2008


 * Either way; I don't care how the article is structured. If we need outside commentary, I'm in favor of that as well. It seems unusual not to note criticism in the lead to summarize the points, though. I have a few more that I can add as well. ClaudeReigns (talk) 04:55, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Youth With A Mission - dead/misleading references
There appears to be a number of false, dead, outdated and/or (apparently) misleading links and references in the Youth With A Mission article.

I'd like to do a bit of clean up and remove these dead and/or misleading references. However, although some broken links and dear reference citations some seem ripe for deletion, I do not want to ruin other Wiki author's previous research and notations. So if a legitimate mistake has been made, or my understanding is limited in these matters, I'd like to open these references up for comment.

Thus, here's a list of incorrect, false, dead, or blatantly misleading links which are, in my opinion, awaiting deletion:

Misleading Reference #1
Youth_With_A_Mission - ^ a b Squire, Aurin. "Parishioner answering missionary call", Miami Herald, May, 2000. Retrieved on 2007-12-11. ""They're popular on college campuses," Channer said. "It's like this great big happy family and you start spending more time with them and less with your actual family and friends.""
 * This issue has been resolved and offending reference deleted Delhiwallah (talk) 07:19, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Reason 1
The reference does not quote the Miami Herald. It's actually a Rick Ross narrative of an alleged article which is not available at the Miami Herald online archives. Issue resolved Delhiwallah (talk) 07:21, 14 March 2008 (UTC)


 * I don't believe that's Ross narrating, but am looking into it, see below. ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:13, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Reason 2
The subject of the article, a lady by the name of LaToya Channer, was not yet involved with YWAM at the time of the alleged article's creation. It was an upcoming event as described by the article. Furthermore, the quoted comment "They're popular on college campuses," Channer said. "It's like this great big happy family and you start spending more time with them and less with your actual family and friends." is referring to an un-named group that Channer said she got involved with in the past during her college career. This quote has nothing to do with YWAM. Rick Ross likely included it on his site as a reference to the nature of cult's on college campuses and definately not at all relating to Youth With A Mission.

See the Rick Ross article at http://www.rickross.com/reference/youth/youth5.html


 * That's odd, I have asked him to clarify this for us. Good catch. You may delete. I'll put it back only with the original source, when found. ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:04, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Ross has no additional information so I am deleting. ClaudeReigns (talk) 00:35, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to look into this and delete it. Delhiwallah (talk) 07:17, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Misleading Reference #2
Youth_With_A_Mission - ^ a b c d Ross, Rick A. (October). Youth With A Mission (html) (english). Retrieved on 2007-12-11. “One former DTS student wrote, "I see how my mind was played with. I feel ripped off—it's just not fair to be taken advantage of". The author of one report stated, "hopefully YWAM is not deliberately brainwashing recruits…they want to do God's work so badly and yet it's wrong". The "ends do not justify the means". Taking into consideration all the available information, it seems to me, that it would not be prudent to recommend Youth With A Mission or any of its Discipleship Schools to anyone.”

Reason 1
The reference does not quote Sara Diamond's book Spiritual Warfare. It's actually another Rick Ross narrative from 18 years ago. The Rick Ross narrative (found at http://www.rickross.com/reference/youth/youth6.html does not include even a single reference or citation that gives us any assurance that his article is well-researched, factual, or verifiable.


 * [That] is the Rick Ross report this refers to. He doesn't quote Diamond, but summarizes. Though he doesn't use inline citation like this article, the references are there, and it seems that all are verifiable besides possibly the Cult Awareness Network information, since that organization was not only put out of business by but also taken over by Scientology. ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:11, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm not suggesting that we delete the Rick Ross reference altogether, but simply that we remove the citation between the Sara Diamond text and the Rick Ross report which is speculative, messy, and lacks insight. Ross' comments that "It seems that YWAM has sought political influence" and his apparent quoting that YWAM "discussed "electrical strategies"" with various nations is unclear and does not clarify or expound upon Diamond's work. What in the world are "electrical strategies", anyways? And did YWAM err in discussing this?


 * I would suggest that unless we can get hold of Sara Diamond's book "Spiritual Warfare", and quote from it directly, that we remove the citation link between the "Support for Ephrain Ríos Montt" section and the Rick Ross report Delhiwallah (talk) 07:51, 14 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Spiritual Warfare p.165:
 * Toward that end [obtaining post-coup funding for the regime in Guatemala from U.S. evangelicals], in June 1982, Rios Montt's aid and Gospel Outreach elder Francisco Bianchi came to the United States for a meeting with U.S. Ambassador to the OAS William Middendorf, then-presidential counsellor Edwin Meese, Interior Secretary James Watt, U.S. Ambassador to Guatemala Fred Chapin and Christian Right leders Pat Robertson, Jerry Falwell, and Loren Cunningham (head of Youth With a Mission). About the same time, the State Department held a special briefing for Christian Right leaders, emphasizing the need for private support for the Rios Montt regime.


 * While drawing further parallels to The Path to 9/11, Blumenthal summarizes Diamond thusly:
 * According to Sara Diamond's book Spiritual Warfare, during the 1980's YWAM "sought to gain influence within the Republican party" while assisting authoritarian governments in South Africa and Central America.


 * appropos to today's mention in the article of "business as mission":
 * Spiritual Warfare p.175:


 * "Even after the scandal surrounding unauthorized U.S. aid to the contras which might have discouraged 'private' donors, a number of groups continued their fundraising. One of the most blatant was Christian Emergency Relief Teams based in Carlsbad, California.... CERT teams have accompanied contra combatants during battles with Nicaraguan troops. 'We are protected by the freedom fighters. They are our guides. They will not allow us in areas that are not safe,' testified a CERT spokesperson.47 Among other supplies, CERT has given contra combatants specially designed hot-weather boots, donated by a company called High Tech Boots, owned by Christians affiliated with Youth With a Mission.48"


 * So you see that drawing the parallel to YWAM itself (not merely Loren Cunningham) is not my original research. ClaudeReigns (talk) 17:59, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Reason 2
If someone wants to reference Sara Diamond then please do so. No link hijacking please.
 * Sorry, would you please clarify? ClaudeReigns (talk) 20:12, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Misleading Reference #3
Youth_With_A_Mission - There'e no text here. Issue resolved. Thanks. Delhiwallah (talk) 08:19, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Reason 1
The reference does not quote Fox News or Rick Ross. It's just a broken reference and does not support the claims that "Fox News asked Rick Ross to clarify his position. "Youth With A Mission is not a cult," stated Ross, but acknowledged that he receives complaints about the group on a monthly basis and that brainwashing, financial dependence, and a lack of financial transparency are recurring themes in the more "serious complaints" This is a serious claim and needs a proper citation


 * fixed the link. ClaudeReigns (talk) 18:39, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Resolved. Thanks for updating the link. Delhiwallah (talk) 08:22, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Misleading Reference #4 (Akha reference)
Youth_With_A_Mission - ^ a b Eden House Children's Home Vern McCulley. “Eden House Children's Home removes Akha girls from their traditional land and Akha villages and exploits them to raise money for the inflated lifestyle of these western missionaries.”

Misleading Reference #5 (Akha reference)
Youth_With_A_Mission -^ a b The Akha Heritage Foundation - www.akha.org.

Misleading Reference #6 (Akha reference)
Youth_With_A_Mission - ^ a b Taking Away Akha Children - Does It BOTHER YOU?. Retrieved on 2007-12-22. “...YWAM's Eden House in Thailand, a mission that takes away only Akha teen girls on their own definition of endangered and then works to convert them.”

Reason 1
These references the original author cites are merely personal correspondence and/or opinions. The quoted works sound childish and lack verifiable data and/or outside sources. Sounds like jealousy or political disagreement rather than any reasonable dispute. Do these guys really intend to rail against an orphanage and call it "genocide" and "racist"? Move on, folks.


 * The Foundation's complaints were noted in the media, and it seems to be the foremost authority on affairs of the Akha people. McDaniels' interview in the New Mandala (a publication of Research School of Pacific and Asian Studies at Australian National University) suggests his opinion has some weight, and also there gives specifics on why he believes that taking Akha orphan girls away from villages and converting them to Christianity in the absence of outside voices might be considered genocide. What the article does not say is that McDaniels has voiced concerns that Eden House is involved in pandering. Other sources which you may consider much more mainstream lend creedence to the idea that YWAM, in other instances, may not be thorough in documenting their legal authority to transfer children [ Portuguese ] and that molestation has been an issue. Shall I add them? I had preferred to omit more sensational details. I would like to know what Saksjn thinks about this as well. ClaudeReigns (talk) 19:17, 13 March 2008 (UTC)

Misleading Reference #7
Youth_With_A_Mission

Reason 1
The article being referenced has nothing to do with YWAM and mentions it only in passing, and out of context, as a cult. The reference to YWAM in the cited material has no relation to the original text.


 * The Ogilvy assertion, that the perception (that YWAM was a cult) had been corrected, evidently had not in the eyes of James B. Jordan, theologian. Jordan is directly referencing a meeting between Loren Cunningham, Walter Martin, and Dr. Alan Gomes in which Loren Cunningham, as it is recorded in the minutes of that meeting published in Lead Us Not Into Deception, admitted he didn't know much about theology; he is also directly referencing well documented claims from non-notable but directly involved apologetic sources which were alarmed at quite a few departures from what is considered orthodox faith, such as the use of alternate names of God from non-Christian religions for the sake of being accessable, and the severity of reactions to questions about theology. I haven't cited Gomes here, though his work is peer-reviewed and academic. It seemed to be the consensus when I arrived here that academic theological sources (apart from YWAMs) held little weight. Perhaps it's a good time to revive that discussion. ClaudeReigns (talk) 19:39, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * ClaudeReigns: The problem with the source you are quoting is the fact that, 1) the source material and the reference are entirely unrelated, 2) the reference author James B. Jordan doesn't write anything about YWAM in the article and simple mentions them flippantly, 3) the reference author does not mention the published work "Lead Us Not Into Deception", 4) the reference author does not mention "Alan Gomes", and 5) the reference article is about Prolifism and sheds no new information on Youth With A Mission whatsoever.


 * To illustrate my point: If I were to write an article about Spain and, in passing, accused you of being, say, a Conquistador, there would hardly be any reason at all to include that weak link in a Wiki entry for churros, would there? Delhiwallah (talk) 07:15, 14 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Your analogy made me laugh! A better analogy to cults is weeds. Some people use the term subjectively in a general sense. This is like an expert gardener, albeit one who clearly prefers a certain varieties, talking about his distaste for a certain kind of landscaping, while mentioning a particular plant as weed, and sparing us the detail (since the case was already made and since he was talking about landscaping).


 * Back to our article, the assertion by Ogilvy that the perception that YWAM was a cult had been corrected, is an assertion that opens up the possibility for counterpoint. This is a clear counterpoint. Had Ogilvy been a degreed horticulturist and not been a member of the Committee for Dandelions, we would take his word at face value. ClaudeReigns (talk) 18:24, 14 March 2008 (UTC)


 * What does any of this have to do with Ogilvy? The disputed citation has nothing to do with Ogilvy. I'm speaking of the Prolifism reference which is an entirely unrelated article that passes as nothing more than hearsay. That is, information from others that cannot be adequately substantiated.


 * Somebody seems to have done a simple search for "YWAM" online and found this link, and then thought to use it over-judiciously as a reference (three times) for completely unrelated articles.


 * I'd suggest this unrelated reference be removed altogether.

other
Furthermore, there are two more broken references, namely Youth_With_A_Mission and Youth_With_A_Mission That refer to absolutely nothing and should be either fixed or deleted as soon as possible. Delhiwallah (talk) 17:16, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * fixed. ClaudeReigns (talk) 19:39, 13 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Delhiwallah (talk) 07:15, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

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