Talk:Youthanasia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HotHat (talk · contribs) 02:00, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

1.Well-written: a.the prose is clear and concise, respects copyright laws, and the spelling and grammar are correct; and b.it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
 * Opening paragraph, "recordings, however", "recordings; however".✅
 * Background section, "Producer Max Norman suggested building a studio of their own.", "Producer Max Norman suggested that they build a new self-dedicated studio."✅
 * Artwork section, "UK" needs to be "United Kingdom" not abbreviated✅
 * Personnel, musician needs to be musicians or "An additional musician", also maybe remastering?✅
 * Nothing wrong here.HotHat (talk) 02:00, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

2.Verifiable with no original research: a.it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline; b.it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines; and c.it contains no original research. 3.Broad in its coverage: a.it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and b.it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). 4.Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each.
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5.Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
 * Nothing wrong here.HotHat (talk) 02:00, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

6.Illustrated, if possible, by images: a.images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content; and b.images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
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Addressed all issues. The reviewer may take a second look.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 05:59, 2 October 2013 (UTC)