Talk:Yufang Jin

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A lot of your information crosses off multiple notability requirements so I'm pretty sure you are already good on that aspect. It is strong in the fact that I feel like you provide so many examples on where her research is significant and it really highlights what she has done as a scientist. It also does not have any bias in it from where I can see.

What I would like to see more of is her publications and what they have investigated and their significance. Go through some of her most famous publications and then summarize the findings and the concepts. Also try to add to your lead and make it deeper. Try and find one or two more public engagements to add if they are their as well. I can't really comment on what you have already written because I feel like it is solid. Once you add these things and then maybe a sidebar on the right this will be a very solid wikipedia entry.

Becca's comments
Overall - nice start, Henry. nicely written

Add an infobox in lead edit the 2nd sentence - remove "for the University"

career & research capitalize job titles (Assistant Research Scientist)

small change: substitute "teaches" for "has also taught"

Expand on her current research - provide brief synopses of some of her projects. incorporate the NSF and NASA grants into the discussion about her research interests and findings. Also you can look on the nsf.gov and nasa.gov and search for grants and link them

You need to find citations and sources other than her website as well — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 01:58, 16 September 2018 (UTC)

add pictures! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 02:02, 16 September 2018 (UTC)