Talk:Yugoslav minelayer Zmaj/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:13, 7 July 2010 (UTC) Overall this article is good, though I have the following concerns:
 * The lead feels a bit meh to me. Can't explain it all that well, but it doesn't feel like there's much to it. Should probably be expanded a bit if nothing else, the article's short but not that short.
 * Added a little bit.
 * Just about every paragraph starts with Zmaj/Drache. Mix it up a bit.
 * Mixed up.
 * "Due to the restrictions of the Versailles Treaty she had to be built as an unarmed auxiliary." comma after treaty. There are a couple extra places where some commas may be needed.
 * Didn't see anything else that needed a comma, but your eyes are fresher than mine.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:14, 7 July 2010 (UTC)

Just a couple things, mainly nitpicks. I'll put it on hold and pass when completed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:13, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 15:27, 7 July 2010 (UTC)