Talk:Yugoslav monitor Drava/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jonas Vinther (talk · contribs) 17:26, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this late tonight. Jonas Vinther (speak to me!) 17:26, 5 November 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay - I'll get to this right away.


 * Is it well-written? Symbol support vote.svg
 * 1. "The Yugoslav monitor Drava was the name ship of the Enns-class river monitors built for the Austro-Hungarian Navy, and was completed in late 1914" - This wording sounds weird to me. How about "The Yugoslav monitor Drava was the name ship of the Enns-class river monitors built for the Austro-Hungarian Navy in 1914"?
 * You're right, it is a bit strangely constructed. I've dropped the year, as the ship was actually built between 1912 and 1914. It's not really necessary in the lead.
 * 2. "and fought the Serbian and Romanian armies" - This is just a suggestions, but how about adding "against" between "fought" and "the"?
 * Done.
 * 3. "Generalfeldmarschall (field marshal) August von Mackensen" - I suggesting changing "(field marshal)" to "(general field marshal)" as that translation is more used.
 * It is meant as an equivalent rather than a translation, I'll add a note
 * 4. Lastly, I suggest changing "Footnotes" to "References", "References" to "Sources", "Books" to "Printed", and "Websites" to "Online". Just a suggestion. :)
 * That's the pattern I use for referencing all my articles, and it's in accordance with the MOS.


 * Is it verifiable with no original research? Symbol support vote.svg
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 * The article is excellently written and meets the GA-criteria. Because the four points I left in the "Well-written" section and minor suggestions, I'm going to pass the article. :) Jonas Vinther (speak to me!) 15:47, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the suggestions, and for the prompt review. Regards, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 21:50, 7 November 2014 (UTC)