Talk:Yury Komarovsky

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Hi everyone, I am new here so I am not quite sure what the proper editing talk page etiquette is. However, I was looking through the page and I noticed a lot of broken and awkward sentences (however, that might just be my inexperience). Considering that I am new, I don't feel adequately prepared or experienced to make these changes. If anyone has any feels the same way or has ideas on how to edit the page to create more flow, then please do so.