Talk:Yusuf Khan and Sherbano

Story
There are two big problems with this article:
 * It consists mostly of the story section, and there is nothing about it in culture or modern references.
 * The story section is way too poetic. I will look at it and try to make it sound more like it is just explaining the story, and not like it is telling one.

Mynameisnotpj (talk) 12:24, 16 April 2008 (UTC)

Is there any reserch article on this story? If not can somebody from the concern villages of tulandey and sheraghund have the courage to search more facts about the story? Lalg90 (talk) 11:59, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Multiple issues with this article
Hello Wikipedians,

I think it is fairly clear that there are many serious issues with this article, and that it needs to be thoroughly reviewed and edited. Firstly, it has no citations whatsoever. Secondly, it has not been written in encyclopedic format. Both of these are basic requirements of Wikipedia articles and can't be overlooked. In addition, only the story of Yusuf Khan and Sherbano has been shared (in excessive detail though a plot summary would suffice), without sections on the contexts and literary criticism about the story.

The story of Yusuf Khan and Sherbano is a beautiful one. I hope that we can work together to fix up this page so that others can find a more helpful introduction to it here on Wikipedia.

Hassamm (talk) 22:09, 21 November 2016 (UTC)