Talk:Zacarías el Perico/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)

Shall take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 08:45, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Lead

 * Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "For years he worked under dual identities as he also worked" - repetition of the word "worked"
 * "but transitioned to working 100% as Zacarias in 2012." - working solely

Professional wrestling career

 * "but by Mid 2007" - mid-2007,
 * "he worked as a regular Mini-Estrella under the name "Atomo", although due to his very short stature did not work regularly as an active competitor." - frequently participate

Mini Máximo (2008–2012)

 * "at times referred to as" - sometimes
 * "as he defeated La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", who was a male masked wrestler), thus forcing La Novia de Chucky to remove his mask per the match stipulation." - defeating La Novia de Chucky ("The Bride of Chucky", a male masked wrestler) and forcing his opponent to remove his mask per match stipulation.
 * "In a Ruleta de la Muerte tag teams face off in a single-elimination tournament, but unlike traditional tournaments," - repetition of tournament/tournaments
 * The term Mask should be wikilinked to Wrestling mask on the first mention not the third
 * "The team that loses the tag team match final" - tne word in bold should be replaced by squad to avoid close repetition of the word "team"

La Peste Negra (2011–2017)

 * "movie series than he usually did." - film
 * "and at times help them cheat during the matches." - occasionally helped them cheat during matches.
 * "Rey Bucanero would leave the group when Mr. Niebla returned but Perico remained with the group" - repetition of the word "group"
 * "at times referred to as Perico Zacarias." - sometimes

Micro-Estrella division (2017–present)

 * "four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - This sentence should begin with a capital letter
 * "Zacarias and his team once again lost to Microman's team." - repetition of the word "team"
 * "Zacarias, Microman, Atomo, and Guapito took on Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito take on, and Zacarias." - Chamuel, El Gallito, and Zacarias.
 * "Zaracias, Chamuel, and Guapito joined forces once again" - teamed up

Independent circuit (2017–present)

 * "While working for CMLL, Zacarias, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - repetition of working/workers and CMLL
 * "Mije and Zacarias lose to Microman and El Gallito by disqualification." - lost
 * "which featured Microman and Gallito defeating Mije and Zacarias." - saw
 * Delink Mr. Niebla since he is already linked earlier in the article

Spanish typos
I have read the article. There are some small typos in Spanish, like Atomo Átomo, cibernetico cibernético or Maximo Máximo. However, there is a big one, since it's Zacarías, not Zacarias. A name change would be needed. Also, one superluchas source calls him Zakarías. HHH Pedrigree (talk) 10:52, 21 August 2020 (UTC)