Talk:Zach Eflin

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http://articles.philly.com/2015-03-14/sports/60090453_1_zach-eflin-san-diego-padres-father — Preceding unsigned comment added by Go Phightins! (talk • contribs) 14:53, 2 January 2016‎
 * Incorporated. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:37, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

GAN pointers, not a review
I can't review this page since I created it, and am the #2 contributor to it, but a few points that came to me as I glanced at the current version: It's way closer to GA status right now than it was yesterday. – Muboshgu (talk) 14:42, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be broken up into multiple paragraphs
 * The Early life needs to be broken up into multiple paragraphs
 * The Padres section needs a paragraph split too.
 * The Phillies section needs to be broken up into subsections
 * Innings pitched should be presented with fractions, not the .1 or .2 decimals.
 * Pitcher profile could speak to his velocity.
 * Thanks, . It's been a little while. I mostly condensed things into single paragraphs (probably from your former appropriate split paragraphs haha). I tried to fix all the fractions from the existing .1 and .2 decimals, but I clearly missed a few. I'll take a gander at Fangraphs to see about velocity. Hope you're well!  Go  Phightins  !  17:27, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , I was thinking that I hadn't seen you pop up on my watchlist in some time. Good to see you're still here. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah honestly it was not intentional that I faded away nor that I found my way back earlier this month. I had forgotten how fun it can be to actually spend a little bit of time working on an article. Hope to do a little sprucing of some Phillies as we head towards opening day ... I've realized since I was last actively working on articles (~ 5 years ago), there are literally zero players still around from that team. So back to the drawing board, I suppose. I've also tried to do a little bit of administrative scut work as penance for having been gone so long—good ole' AFDs that fester and such. So yeah, I'm back-ish for a little while at least. Glad to see you and Wizardman and co still seem to be holding down the fort!  Go  Phightins  !  17:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)