Talk:Zach Hankins/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the speedy review. Did not expect one this quick. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Early life and high school career

 * Wikilink points, rebounds and shooting to their respective articles to help those unfamiliar with basketball
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "In the fall of 2013," - please avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
 * So I should just say 2013? ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Preferably state the month Hankins injured his left foot or late 2013 MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Changed to late 2013, as I can't find the month but I think it was October. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Hankins was running up the floor and stopped abruptly, breaking his foot." - you can say it was the left foot Hankins broke as stated by The Detroit News
 * Clarified. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "so he committed to the Bulldogs." - make it clear that Hankins committed to playing college basketball for the Bulldogs.
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

College career

 * Wikilink Bevo Francis Award
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink block to Block (basketball) on the first time the term is mentioned and field goal percentage
 * Done and I already linked field goal percentage. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "for top small college player" - for the top
 * Good catch. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink National Player of the Year to NABC Player of the Year
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Add a link to most valuable player for non-Basketball readers
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "but stuck with new coach Travis Steele after Steele said Hankins was still a priority. " - remained
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "He led the Musketeers to a 19-16 record and had 13 points, nine rebounds and two assists in a 78-76 overtime loss" - replace the hyphens with en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "in the second round of the NIT." - the 2019 National Invitation Tournament.7
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)