Talk:Zahamena National Park/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:40, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:40, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * External links good.
 * Link on first use: avifauna, species, faunal, lemur, amphibians, rainforest, topography, flora, endemic
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * vorondolomena As a word in a foreign language, this should be in italics, along with the other foreign words.
 * Link the places referred to in the geography section if they're notable.
 * It is part of the rainforest topography and ecology of the Rainforests of the Atsinanana. Awkward, rephrase.
 * undulating topography of the eastern rock faces what does this mean?
 * well defined boundaries on the north east and south. How are they defined?
 * is drained by rivers such as the Sahatavy River and the Sarondrina River. Awkward too many uses of river(s), rephrase.
 * Is a map of the park itself available?
 * Convert all measurement into English units as well.
 * the type of vegetation is also of varying biodiversity You're not using biodiversity properly.
 * link or explain sclerophyllous montane forest.
 * ferns Polystichum as dominant flora at the floor level fix this
 * aye-aye or the local endemic and endangered Lake Alaotra bamboo lemur "or"?
 * Boa manditra (VU) what does this mean?
 * 22 are reported under threatened category, 8 species are under critically endangered list, 9 species are endangered, and 5 species are vulnerable Awkward, rephrase.
 * bird area of 731 kilometres (454.22 mi) in 2001, in the total protected area including the park area. I think that you mean square kilometers here and what does bird area mean? And move the date to after identified.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:31, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Failed for lack of response.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:49, 8 November 2015 (UTC)