Talk:Zanzibar Blue

Grammer
Dig if you will the second and third line:

"Known for its live jazz each night and for Sunday brunch, it branded itself as 'Philadelphia's Premier Jazz Club'. Owned by brothers Robert and Benjamin Jr. Bynum, the club was located in Center City, Philadelphia below the Bellevue on the Avenue of the Arts."

Both sentences have exactly the same sentence structure, which makes for awkward wording. Should I vary the phrase up a bit?

Dancanm (talk) 21:59, 30 March 2008 (UTC)