Talk:Zazen Xstasy

This needs more work
I came across this article by accident, as one of the articles flagged as needing editing. I did some work trying to adjust some choppy sentences, although I'll admit I prefer fewer longer ones as opposed to shorter choppier ones. (Shorter choppier one are often the result of contradictory edits by many people, a problem all too common on Wikipedia.) But this needs a lot more done to it. I was surprised by some of the sloppiness that was never corrected (like the use of "approx" and use of foreign words with no explanation or even wikilinks).

I added some tags as I didn't think anyone would know what "PV" and "HP" meant (what do they mean?). I also forgot to add some citation needed tags, but maybe another day... __Justin Namen (talk) 03:10, 11 April 2017 (UTC)

PV = Promotional video. HP = Homepage. Yaguchi2000 (talk) 18:48, 28 September 2019 (UTC)