Talk:Zdenko Blažeković/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 14:03, 10 January 2014 (UTC)


 * I've got this one. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 14:03, 10 January 2014 (UTC)

Comments by Peacemaker67 (send... over) 06:57, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
 * in the lead, the first sentence is too long, and communist should not have an initial capital.
 * the first para of "Command of the Ustaše University Centre and Ustaše Youth" needs to be broken up, it is far too long.


 * Better? 23 editor (talk) 21:09, 21 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi 23, sorry this has stalled, but I have been unable to express properly my issues with the article as it is. Timbouctou has raised a number of issues on the article talk page which I believe do need to be addressed. I am going to place this on hold for a week in the hope that those issues can be addressed in that period. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:54, 26 January 2014 (UTC)


 * I've tweaked said parts according to Tim's translation. 23 editor (talk) 19:24, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Peacemaker has essentially disappeared, so I'm going to put this one back in the review queue. Wizardman  02:17, 22 February 2014 (UTC)