Talk:Zenas Bliss/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell  |  Penny for your thoughts?   22:05, 4 April 2010 (UTC) Another very well put-together article on a MoH winner. I'm happy this meets the criteria, however, there are a few things I picked up on as I read through. I don't see why any of those would prevent this article from attaining GA status but they're worth looking at. Good work. HJ Mitchell |  Penny for your thoughts?   22:05, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * For first mention, all ranks should be linked
 * Done - I think this is fixed. --Kumioko (talk) 02:08, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest putting his rank in the lead
 * I understand the difficulties with finding sources from this period, but if you could broaden the range of sources, it certainly wouldn't hurt.
 * Do we have a cause of death?
 * Not yet but Ill keep looking. --Kumioko (talk) 02:08, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The civil war section jumps from the start of the war to bis capture- is there any more detail on his service?