Talk:Zennor Head/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 20:17, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review. I'll do a close readthrough of the article's text today or tomorrow, noting any initial problems, followed by the criteria checklist. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:17, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

Initial readthrough

 * The lead section needs work to meet WP:LEAD; this section should summarize all the sections that follow (including etymology and history), and contain no important information not in those sections. -- Khazar2 (talk) 21:15, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "it is flanked by two coves, Pendour and Porthzennor" -- does the "it" here refer to the village of Zennor or the promontory? -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:32, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
 * The headland, I have corrected this.-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 20:40, 3 January 2013 (UTC)