Talk:Zephyr Wright

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I have added much to Wright's personal life, making not especially of her education. I would like to note that since Wright is often talked about only as an auxiliary figure to Lyndon Johnson, I have included her own voice as a way to emphasize her individuality. As such the article is quite quote-heavy. Furthermore, I have added an infobox with her birth and death date, as well as a photo from the signing of the Voting Rights Act. Benebeneb (talk) 01:50, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

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The first sentence places Wright as a woman who exists only as an auxiliary figure in the life of someone else. While her connection to Johnson is certainly relevant, I doubt that is the core argument for her inclusion in wikipedia. I would like to see the first sentence mention her career or political/social contributions beyond for whom she cooked. Benebeneb (talk) 20:13, 10 February 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Benebeneb (talk • contribs) 20:10, 10 February 2020 (UTC)