Talk:Zeppelin-Staaken L/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 16:29, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 19:08, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

I will take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 19:08, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Prelim

 * No duplicated links
 * Image correctly licensed
 * Article is stable
 * Earwig reports no copyvio

Lede and infobox

 * What happened to the six later orders? Neither main text nor lede mentions their fate
 * What's the WD.27? The only mention is in the lede header
 * The idea that it is "long range" is in lede and infobox but not clearly mentioned in main text, suggest adding a word or two to ensure this is cited

Background and description

 * While I am aware of your reluctance to repeat content in the lede in main text for short articles, I really think you need to do more of it here. The lede is a summary of the main text, not an introduction to it. Please add mention of WWI, the Imperial German Navy, and the tractor-pusher nature of the engines. This content is currently uncited, being only present in the lede
 * Link Otto Philipp if that's the correct one?
 * Not sure; I can't find a first name for the guy--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Link Zeppelin-Staaken
 * Link Zeppelin-Staaken R.VI
 * Both linked in the lede--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * "bombardardier's" sp
 * "Balanced ailerons..." for this and the following sentence, do we know what impact these features/changes had?
 * The only thing that I know for certain is that they made moving the control surfaces easier for the pilot, which is explained in the link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * You name a lot of different roles for the aircraft, which I assume will have been shared by the crew. To avoid confusion, could you mention the crew complement earlier than the "Specifications" section?
 * What's a gravity tank?
 * Explained better--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

History

 * Link Warnemünde