Talk:Zion Williamson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 13:51, 2 February 2019 (UTC)

I've started a look at this, will post a review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 13:51, 2 February 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

Infobox

 * The height listed here (6ft 8in) is different to the lead (6ft 7in).

Early life

 * "When he was 5 years old", MOS:NUMERAL states that numbers lower than ten should be spelled out instead of using digits.
 * "Then 9 years ago, at age 9", drop the nine years ago. Definite time spans like this are discouraged as they will become out of date and will very likely be forgotten about. The numeral issue above applies to nine here too.
 * 5:00 a.m. > 5 a.m., I don't think the minutes are necessary if they are 0.

Early years

 * "On August", either there's a date missing from here or it should read in August.

Junior season

 * "the Bojangles Bracket", I'm not sure what this means. Is it just a sponsor?
 * "On January 15, 2017, rapper Drake wore Williamson's jersey in an Instagram post.", I think this could do with more explanation as to why it is notable. Even if it's just something along the lines of "Williamson received nationwide publicity after..."
 * "High school sports website named him", what website?

Recruiting

 * "and the number one player in the 2018 class by recruiting service 247Sports", I think somethings missing from this sentence. "was ranked the number one..." perhaps?

College career

 * R.J. Barrett is linked in the opening paragraph but is also linked in the previous section. WP:OVERLINK states that repeat links like this should be avoided.
 * Same as above with Clemson in the second paragraph.

Personal life

 * Could this section not be merged into the early life section? All of the info here is either parentage or schooling and occured before his basketball career really starts.