Talk:Zoombezi Bay

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Entire current article sounds like it was taken from advertising copy or directly written by amusement park marketing department. Not objective at all, and heavily compromised by peacock terms. Table of attractions is largely fluff and copy within seems to be from some kind of brochure.

The article will need heavy slimming-down. 24.31.180.180 (talk) 01:26, 22 June 2008 (UTC)