Talk:Zuhur Wanasi

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You definitely need a short sentence introducing the article at the top of the page. It should be a snippet of who Zuhur Wannasi is or what she does.

You also need to add citations. There is a how to on how to cite the source in Wikipedia on the library research page that we used in class.

I really like how you provided links to other pages. This will definitely help in keeping your Wikipedia page to stick. It shows that Zuhur is related in some way to important events, etc.

I think your content is really good. You just need to cite everything, so your article will stick.

Hpotter5 (talk) 17:39, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

I think you need to add more about her literarute in that section. Maybe add more context to how her literature applied to the war, what themes it included, and how it was recieved. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ael96 (talk • contribs) 00:04, 8 October 2014 (UTC)

I'm really glad you added the little synopsis before the article actually begins. It really helps me focus in on the author.

There are a few grammatical errors. If you read the article aloud, you will be able to easily identify the mistakes. I'm sure it doesn't really matter to Wikipedia, but I think "18" should be written out since it is one word. I also think that the works need to be italicized or in quotes to indicate that they are books, short stories, etc.

I love that you added a "See also" section. You have many great references and links to other pages. Your article is very likely to stick.

Just make the few changes to grammar and you should be good to submit! :)

Hpotter5 (talk) 18:22, 13 October 2014 (UTC)