Talk:Zytglogge/GA1

GA Review
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 * "Built at around the turn of the 13th century," &rarr; "Built in the early 13th century,"
 * "When it was built – probably at around 1218–20[2] – the Zytglogge served as the gate tower of Berne's western fortifications. " &rarr; "When it was built around 1218–20,[2] the Zytglogge served as the gate tower of Berne's western fortifications. "
 * "the Empire (see: Golden Charter of Bern). At " &rarr; "the Empire. At " – remove references like that tell the reader to "see" something because when they print it out, they can't click on it ;) Articles are supposed to be able to be understood in any medium, format, etc.
 * The image in " Interior" is huge – perhaps use a width of 500px or so. It won't look good on small screens.
 * " Bibliography" section goes after "References"
 * Why is there an image in " References"? Move it somewhere else (the text that it is near must discuss it) or remove it.
 * There are so many images, that I suggest staggering them per MOS:IMAGE

Gary King ( talk ) 19:59, 27 June 2008 (UTC)


 * ✅ All done, thanks!  Sandstein   20:51, 27 June 2008 (UTC)